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choices
if i am to have
any choices, i do not
want my heart to break,
in case there is a chance
her love could spill out.
any choices, i do not
want my heart to break,
in case there is a chance
her love could spill out.
Published 26th Jan 2024
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26th Jan 2024 5:10am
Dear J,
I loved the fragility of this piece. Keeping close that special feeling of love from someone we adore. Lovely piece. H🌷
I loved the fragility of this piece. Keeping close that special feeling of love from someone we adore. Lovely piece. H🌷
26th Jan 2024 5:20am
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26th Jan 2024 11:50am
Too true...its not easy to plunge and yet how tempting at times.:) good read, Wolf.
26th Jan 2024 12:06pm
26th Jan 2024 12:02pm
You're starting to really move that pen like a paint brush painting masterpieces. Solid work!
26th Jan 2024 12:07pm
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26th Jan 2024 3:38pm
YES! This is so delicate, and thoughtfully penned.
Her love is in your heart, and you don't want to risk losing a single drop. Fucking excellence, all the way around. The central thought tied into a deeper layer, and I LOVE THAT SHIT SO MUCH!
Really lovely piece, my friend.
Her love is in your heart, and you don't want to risk losing a single drop. Fucking excellence, all the way around. The central thought tied into a deeper layer, and I LOVE THAT SHIT SO MUCH!
Really lovely piece, my friend.
26th Jan 2024 6:27pm
