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Beckoned
He pushes the boundaries of dominance,
to the point of rudeness
to the point of anti-feminism
to the point of maximum yang
to the point of wildly seductive don't go there danger
i know better.
i know better
but
i want to follow him.
i hope i do
i hope i don't
Now where do i go?
to the point of rudeness
to the point of anti-feminism
to the point of maximum yang
to the point of wildly seductive don't go there danger
i know better.
i know better
but
i want to follow him.
i hope i do
i hope i don't
Now where do i go?
Published 21st Jan 2024
Author's Note
He's an Aries. Ares,god of war. Anyway, even though I've processed that he's not right for me, I'm still feeling the lingering seduction of his dominance. Can't help it. Hopefully it will dissipate soon.
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21st Jan 2024 4:39pm
Boy oh boy, I KNOW this feeling…
Throw all caution to the wind and go for it, get lost in the fire or keep your sanity and yearn - I used always forgo sanity. It was never worth it afterward.
You got this, girl.
Throw all caution to the wind and go for it, get lost in the fire or keep your sanity and yearn - I used always forgo sanity. It was never worth it afterward.
You got this, girl.
21st Jan 2024 6:20pm
21st Jan 2024 8:35pm
Such a cool and accurate poem. I've soooo been there. I used to go, and it would be a disaster, lol
The way you wrote your poem expressed that feeling perfectly.
The way you wrote your poem expressed that feeling perfectly.
21st Jan 2024 9:09pm
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21st Jan 2024 11:03pm
I love a Dominant man but I will always make him fight to dominate me I understand 💕
23rd Jan 2024 2:18am
i have met many women that seem to follow their head instead of their heart. men are not the only gender to be blamed for thinking with the wrong organs.
23rd Jan 2024 2:19am
22nd Jan 2024 3:18am
Dear PD,
You didn’t ask but I’ll tell you anyway 😉 go for it. Right or wrong for you be damned. Have fun with him and let me live vicariously through you! It would be very altruistic thing for you to do 😄
Nah, just funnin ya! Except seriously, you should go for it. Just leave your heart in a jar on the shelf until you’ve finished. Totally relatable situation you’ve penned excellently. H🌷
You didn’t ask but I’ll tell you anyway 😉 go for it. Right or wrong for you be damned. Have fun with him and let me live vicariously through you! It would be very altruistic thing for you to do 😄
Nah, just funnin ya! Except seriously, you should go for it. Just leave your heart in a jar on the shelf until you’ve finished. Totally relatable situation you’ve penned excellently. H🌷
23rd Jan 2024 2:18am
H, thanks...I get the spirit of adventure but not sure I can be that carefree. He and I are exchanging messages. That he's willing to talk at least makes him less of a Troglodyte than I thought.
22nd Jan 2024 6:19am
23rd Jan 2024 2:20am
23rd Jan 2024 4:24am
to the point of no return, huh? Get to the point, will you?! (Said kindly, lol) ;-)
24th Jan 2024 00:23am
31st Jan 2024 1:09pm
You'll end up training him.
Most submissive women do that in the end and the men follow. Quirky, right ?
Though most Dominant men have an agenda. It starts one way and the sub molds him into what she needs. It's actually the way it should be I think ...
Of course the Dom will have some surprises that will take you off guard ..
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Most submissive women do that in the end and the men follow. Quirky, right ?
Though most Dominant men have an agenda. It starts one way and the sub molds him into what she needs. It's actually the way it should be I think ...
Of course the Dom will have some surprises that will take you off guard ..
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1st Feb 2024 00:03am
Big thanks, and big you're right. We've been talking online, and I'm almost coaching him, and helping him clarify who he is at this point.
