I heard you the first fucking time

hello beautiful how are you doing today I love what you did here with the never by not giving you a response they answered or you did it for them with a finality... this one hurts 💕

Thank you for seeing that my lovely friend. Choosing not to decide is a choice. It hurts. Beyond words.

It must feel like a shovel digging into someone's heart like firefighters do in forests to contain and shut off the flames. This is a sad one.

and yet the fire doesn't go out.

Thank you

That's a kick in the crotch for sure.

Yeah. And that shit hurts. Even for girls. Our little girl wood is super sensitive, you know.

Ouch! That is some cold pain right there. Really tight bringing on the emotions

Thank you darlings. I appreciate the remarks.

Fucking chilling. Left frostbite on my inhales.

i hear the pain in this one Betty, it's their loss

I believe that every other breath. But those in-between beats... fuuuuckk. Thank you my friend. I appreciate you.

Dear B,

Reading this sparked such a plethora of emotions because silence has always spoken louder than anything else. The formatting describing this situation underscores a feeling of fury and bereft-ness for me. What a putz. It makes me want to say “man up and just tell me the truth!”  Alas…
Aside from all that, great write. H🌷

MAN UP AND JUST TELL ME THE TRUTH!

Right?!

Hon, you always see me. And I need that way more than I let on. Thank you. I appreciate the fuck out of you.

Mind blowing. That one unspoken word speaks volumes. This poem was a case of dynamite in its explosive brilliance.

Thank you my friend.

BOOM.

It only took out the walls of my heart. Well worth the extra space!

Boom!

POW!

UGH!

(SOB)

ARG!

Non-words slice just as deep, if not deeper sometimes.
His fucking loss.

You think?

I'm pretty sure he's relieved.

I'm waiting to feel that way, too.

I LOVE YOU!

An excellent and I'll say an honorable mention in the competition.

Thank you! I appreciate the way you really read through the contest entries. I find that to be really admirable, and I hope to follow your example.

I appreciate the read and review, and the reading list.

Good luck to you as well!