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.:The Best Choice in The Solar Ring:.
Look here..Klaatu... can I call you Bob?
Every planet that looks good doesn’t necessarily mean it’s the greatest planet for you or yours
Look, travel intergalactic…take a few more tours
Don’t let this be a one stop, shop and cop
Look around; you just might want to do another planet
Do a fly-by in your saucer, then land it
See, this is planet Earth… you stick around, I promise you
You won’t be able to stand it.
The forests? The wood? You can’t even sand it
A solar-assist refund
Look here
You’ll demand it
Earth…it equates.. Fossil as in colossal!
I can’t even imagine who’s advising you
Telling you that they’re looking out for your best interest
How could they or would even be recommending this
I just can’t see it; it’s beyond me
But look; you could be more blind than me
Been here long? hmmmm that could be what’s wrong
This planet's…full of chaos & confusion,
As inhabitants we really know how to fan it
And if I was you and I could...I’d get off it
I would blast off real quick.
Fast and in a hurry!
Roger that! I’d be one of the first ones to scurry!
These fucking inter-asinine wars; such bores
Please excuse “my French” But this planet doesn’t even have one decent wench
If you find one she’s an over-compensated bitch
Think about it; you know this place smells like a ditch
One that’s infested…the whole damn place has been molested
The food supply…with its poisonous spores
Leading intellectuals, bunch of leaders without mores
The environment, the air & land depletion
In general, even amongst the humans
The more well off they are
They’ll be the main ones doing the leaching
I mean look here; Bob…you want it, you can have it
I mean do your thing
I’m just saying, you might want to re-think these things!
I’m sure it’s not one of the Best Choices within The Solar Rings
I’m just sayin’
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Published 29th Apr 2012
| Edited 2nd May 2012
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Anonymous
6th May 2012 4:28pm
Your writes always make me giggle a little-and think as well..really dig it! The planet is billions of years old and we just a novel interruption in things but one day we will be gone and plastic will be the human layer-like the Jurassic one-LOL (((my take on it)) and to quote one of my fav smart asses-
“The planet is fine. The people are fucked.”
― George Carlin
I loved it-great write! Peace and Thank you , Miki
“The planet is fine. The people are fucked.”
― George Carlin
I loved it-great write! Peace and Thank you , Miki
7th May 2012 3:25am
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Glad we good for a smile Miki.. That works if nothing else does..
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Glad we good for a smile Miki.. That works if nothing else does..
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