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Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
When madness beseeches me
to break my body against
the pliant ground
I think of the kind lips
I tasted yesterday
and all my yesterdays culminate
into one ethereal instant
because time has no meaning,
no bearing, no recourse, no match,
it’s stretched out in an infinite string
of sped-up needless nights
and lived in one
checkered photograph
at a time with no future ahead
and but a few
undeveloped Polaroids of yesterday
flapping behind like
blasphemed Tarot cards
now gives way to nothing
the things I said
the things you did
the way it
never happened
until this moment
and my rage is
grand theater
against an infinite jester
lighting the tips of
votive candles
with the long matches
they use at church altars
to make wishes for
dead people in robes
as if we can pray
to the saints of tomorrow
as if we can ask to smell
the sulfur of the match as it
smokes out, leaving flame in
the maw of a tribute to no one
but at least the smell is pleasant
as if
we had a flame,
and it was more than
nihilistic folderol in a
cold vacuum of space that
felt heat for a brief time
because the hallucination
I had, the dream I never dreamed
was warm in the cold void,
and the drug I tripped on
was the echo of your face
There should have been time for us
There should have been time for us
But bells echo on my hat
and show that
I have always
been a fool
I touch the candle
with a fading finger
and we both
go
out
to break my body against
the pliant ground
I think of the kind lips
I tasted yesterday
and all my yesterdays culminate
into one ethereal instant
because time has no meaning,
no bearing, no recourse, no match,
it’s stretched out in an infinite string
of sped-up needless nights
and lived in one
checkered photograph
at a time with no future ahead
and but a few
undeveloped Polaroids of yesterday
flapping behind like
blasphemed Tarot cards
now gives way to nothing
the things I said
the things you did
the way it
never happened
until this moment
and my rage is
grand theater
against an infinite jester
lighting the tips of
votive candles
with the long matches
they use at church altars
to make wishes for
dead people in robes
as if we can pray
to the saints of tomorrow
as if we can ask to smell
the sulfur of the match as it
smokes out, leaving flame in
the maw of a tribute to no one
but at least the smell is pleasant
as if
we had a flame,
and it was more than
nihilistic folderol in a
cold vacuum of space that
felt heat for a brief time
because the hallucination
I had, the dream I never dreamed
was warm in the cold void,
and the drug I tripped on
was the echo of your face
There should have been time for us
There should have been time for us
But bells echo on my hat
and show that
I have always
been a fool
I touch the candle
with a fading finger
and we both
go
out
Author's Note
Out, out brief candle...
Act 5 Scene 5 -- lines 16 to 28
https://myshakespeare.com/macbeth/act-5-scene-5
Act 5 Scene 5 -- lines 16 to 28
https://myshakespeare.com/macbeth/act-5-scene-5
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Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-27)
10th Jan 2024 3:21am
Old Bill was an existentialist, I suspect, and long before that was trendy in philosophical circles. There are many other passages of his as evidence for that, with the one from Macbeth as the most prominent.
You've got a rich expansion of that going on here.
You've got a rich expansion of that going on here.
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-27)
Thanks, I'm a huge fan, actually. More of the plays than the poetry.
I like a good ripped-off Greek dramedy with a lot of penis jokes. Who doesn't?!
But this moment. This speech, this sonnet.... it's so quintessential Bill.
The moment he loses her and begins a glorious lamentation, and that lamentation triggers such a grand gesture. But through it all, through the grand gesture is the the theatrics of realizing that he's fate's bitch, and none of it has any meaning at all... resonates with me.
Thanks for understanding the expansion. I'm never sure if it's safe to walk these halls without my 17-inch dildo and twat clamps.
I like a good ripped-off Greek dramedy with a lot of penis jokes. Who doesn't?!
But this moment. This speech, this sonnet.... it's so quintessential Bill.
The moment he loses her and begins a glorious lamentation, and that lamentation triggers such a grand gesture. But through it all, through the grand gesture is the the theatrics of realizing that he's fate's bitch, and none of it has any meaning at all... resonates with me.
Thanks for understanding the expansion. I'm never sure if it's safe to walk these halls without my 17-inch dildo and twat clamps.
Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-27)
10th Jan 2024 3:41am
If you haven't already been, I highly recommend exploring the Folger Shakespeare Library.
No dildos in the gift shop though:)
No dildos in the gift shop though:)
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-27)
10th Jan 2024 9:00pm
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-27)
10th Jan 2024 3:22am
hello beautiful Betty this is some of your best writing right here
I am at a loss for words but then they aren't needed you know how I feel....💕
time made a place for us it's now...
I am at a loss for words but then they aren't needed you know how I feel....💕
time made a place for us it's now...
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-27)
10th Jan 2024 3:26am
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 5:26am
Dear B,
I confess a great deal of ignorance when it comes to many of the great poetry writers mentioned here on site. And if I never read any of their stuff I’m grateful I got to read yours. This piece drips, for me, like an epic love story gone sadly amok. One that transcends time and stays with the reader forever. The way you move and weave this with style and grace like W. Shakespeare is beautiful. I’ve always admired those you can reference and quote him. I humbly bow down (but not that far because then you’re going to have to pick me up) this is an extraordinary piece of art. Absolutely beautiful. H🌷
I confess a great deal of ignorance when it comes to many of the great poetry writers mentioned here on site. And if I never read any of their stuff I’m grateful I got to read yours. This piece drips, for me, like an epic love story gone sadly amok. One that transcends time and stays with the reader forever. The way you move and weave this with style and grace like W. Shakespeare is beautiful. I’ve always admired those you can reference and quote him. I humbly bow down (but not that far because then you’re going to have to pick me up) this is an extraordinary piece of art. Absolutely beautiful. H🌷
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 9:09pm
Ah. It is. Lady Macbeth is a woman who has all she needs, and her machinations drive her to use sex and honor to get more. It's her downfall.
(She insults her man's pee-pee and bullies his ass to murder folks, and that makes her my hero.)
But I digress, yes. It really is an epic love story gone wrong.
It really is...
As for cool poets? Sheet, girl. Just because they're in a bio or did some neat stuff in England 600 years ago doesn't mean shit. There are true artists. People who make and move worlds with verse. Some are right here. :)
(She insults her man's pee-pee and bullies his ass to murder folks, and that makes her my hero.)
But I digress, yes. It really is an epic love story gone wrong.
It really is...
As for cool poets? Sheet, girl. Just because they're in a bio or did some neat stuff in England 600 years ago doesn't mean shit. There are true artists. People who make and move worlds with verse. Some are right here. :)
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 12:12pm
The feel of this one is almost reverent...like an invocation...I'm at a loss for words with this one, honestly. Everything about it moves me & I'm keeping it close
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 9:11pm
Yes, like an invocation for the dead I guess. It was written that way and I appreciate you for noting it.
The scene starts with Lady MacBeth's suicide. She throws herself off the castle, and the rest is MacBeth lamenting ... everything he did, he did for them, and it drove her so insane she had to end it.
Who can't relate to being driven insane by a man gone in the wrong direction?
The scene starts with Lady MacBeth's suicide. She throws herself off the castle, and the rest is MacBeth lamenting ... everything he did, he did for them, and it drove her so insane she had to end it.
Who can't relate to being driven insane by a man gone in the wrong direction?
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 1:09pm
Poetry sometimes is like a competition to see who has the most heartbreak ...
This one is coming in loud and clear.
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This one is coming in loud and clear.
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 9:11pm
I like to have my heart ripped out pretty frequently. Keeps me on my toes!
fuck
Yeah. You get it.
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10th Jan 2024 9:20pm
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 1:12pm
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10th Jan 2024 9:12pm
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
10th Jan 2024 8:37pm
You had me at MacBeth! I'll have to allow thoughts to digest on this one, so adding it to return!
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10th Jan 2024 9:12pm
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
11th Jan 2024 3:02am
I hope that you realize that this is a brilliant write. I do. It's amazing.
It is also proof that AI will never surpass the ability of the human psyche. It cannot possess one. It cannot do what you just did. It can only mimic, and only generically.
You're a goddamn literary savior.
It is also proof that AI will never surpass the ability of the human psyche. It cannot possess one. It cannot do what you just did. It can only mimic, and only generically.
You're a goddamn literary savior.
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
11th Jan 2024 9:24pm
Well shitball, Styx, what the fuck do I say to something like that?!
Oh. I know...
Thank you. I respect your art, and it means so fucking much to get such high praise.
Oh. I know...
Thank you. I respect your art, and it means so fucking much to get such high praise.
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
11th Jan 2024 9:27pm
This poem is spectacular. It's glossolalia at 70 wpm. Wow wow wow.
I was watching "Upstart Crow" on the tube last night and the episode was spoofing the Scottish play, which is the only play of his that I'm really conversant with other than *Hamlet*.
Kudos. Brilliant! How in the world have I missed you? Rectifying right now as I click the follow, all that.
I was watching "Upstart Crow" on the tube last night and the episode was spoofing the Scottish play, which is the only play of his that I'm really conversant with other than *Hamlet*.
Kudos. Brilliant! How in the world have I missed you? Rectifying right now as I click the follow, all that.
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
11th Jan 2024 9:47pm
You are hot as fuck for using glossolalia in casual conversation. That was like, a Dictionary Word of the Day a few months ago and I was like... the fuck?!
I had to take a year of Shakey, and a year of poetry, so I have about a dozen plays I'm pretty fluent in. I focus on the feminist gaze in the plays and the roles of Gertrude and Ophelia in Hamlet are shitty -- they're used, abused, gaslit and killed for the purpose advancing men.
King Lear and MacBeth have the baddest bitches in the portfolio, so they're my favs. They still all die, but that's what makes it beautiful... heh heh heh
Hey, thanks. Most of my shit is porn, so don't hope for much. But I appreciate you, and it's good to meet you.
I had to take a year of Shakey, and a year of poetry, so I have about a dozen plays I'm pretty fluent in. I focus on the feminist gaze in the plays and the roles of Gertrude and Ophelia in Hamlet are shitty -- they're used, abused, gaslit and killed for the purpose advancing men.
King Lear and MacBeth have the baddest bitches in the portfolio, so they're my favs. They still all die, but that's what makes it beautiful... heh heh heh
Hey, thanks. Most of my shit is porn, so don't hope for much. But I appreciate you, and it's good to meet you.
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
11th Jan 2024 10:05pm
You would love "Upstart Crow." Shakespeare's landlady's daughter longs to have a female role in one of his plays but of course in those days the female parts were all played by boys.
I too took a semester of Shakespeare (nearly sixty years ago) wherein we read all the plays, but to read them all that quickly...I must go back and read a few more while I still have time and energy. But at least I caught your allusions.
Wow. What a day. A tankard of wonderful, one might say.
I too took a semester of Shakespeare (nearly sixty years ago) wherein we read all the plays, but to read them all that quickly...I must go back and read a few more while I still have time and energy. But at least I caught your allusions.
Wow. What a day. A tankard of wonderful, one might say.
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
12th Jan 2024 1:27am
Well, they haven’t changed in 60 years.
(rimshot… snare)
I’m thrilled to be part of your wonderful, my man. Thank you for the stimulating discourse. I really do appreciate that. See you around.
(rimshot… snare)
I’m thrilled to be part of your wonderful, my man. Thank you for the stimulating discourse. I really do appreciate that. See you around.
Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
12th Jan 2024 5:16am
Hey Betty,
This is stunning. All the revamping of a classic - making it super cool to read. I have to admit I don't know or read
any of the classical stuff. But this is my jam. Gooseberry jam to be exact. Know why - cause this gave me goosebumps
and it's a European berry!!!. You slayed Macbeth amiga:)
This is stunning. All the revamping of a classic - making it super cool to read. I have to admit I don't know or read
any of the classical stuff. But this is my jam. Gooseberry jam to be exact. Know why - cause this gave me goosebumps
and it's a European berry!!!. You slayed Macbeth amiga:)
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Re: Re. Tomorrow, and other nihilistic folderol (Macbeth, 5.5.16-28)
13th Jan 2024 9:27pm