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Angry heart and Soul Afire
Engulfed by life's fiery core,
My heart rages, a furious bull's roar.
My soul fumes with ire,
At the world's sordid mire.
War, hunger, disdain persist,
A plight that won't desist.
The shadow of sadness looms,
Ignorance deepens the gloom.
The morbidity of existence,
Cloaked in a guise of pretense.
My heart rages, a furious bull's roar.
My soul fumes with ire,
At the world's sordid mire.
War, hunger, disdain persist,
A plight that won't desist.
The shadow of sadness looms,
Ignorance deepens the gloom.
The morbidity of existence,
Cloaked in a guise of pretense.
Published 31st Dec 2023
Author's Note
In the fiery crucible of existence, this poem delves into the tumultuous emotions of a heart raging against a world marred by persistent strife and obscured truths, where the soul's ire confronts the sordid mire of war, hunger, and disdain.
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31st Dec 2023 10:01am
This read as being very fierce, intense, bold but also somehow a bit vulnerable. Fire and smoke kind of feeling.
I enjoyed the read, usually I am not so very fond of rhyming but you did a great job here hence the rhyming!
I enjoyed the read, usually I am not so very fond of rhyming but you did a great job here hence the rhyming!
Thanks for the kind note, it is encouraging. The rhyme was an after thought, but the intent was to raise awareness about world around
