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Sometimes I forget.
Sometimes I forget
How much I love you.
And I fall into a deep dark crevice.
And then I climb
up a silver chain of hearts
To the gusset of lust.
just To remember again.
How much I love you.
And I fall into a deep dark crevice.
And then I climb
up a silver chain of hearts
To the gusset of lust.
just To remember again.
Published 29th Dec 2023
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29th Dec 2023 5:48am
Dear J,
I enjoyed the images you created in your poem. deep dark crevice.
silver chain of hearts
gusset of lust. Great use of dark and light mixed together. H🌷
I enjoyed the images you created in your poem. deep dark crevice.
silver chain of hearts
gusset of lust. Great use of dark and light mixed together. H🌷
29th Dec 2023 3:52pm
29th Dec 2023 4:00pm
29th Dec 2023 4:34pm
Most of us can relate to forgetting those magic moments, great reminder. Hugs and peace, Oral
30th Dec 2023 1:39am
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30th Dec 2023 10:39pm
5th Jan 2024 9:22pm
Very nice - loved reading it the metaphors are splendid -"silver chain of hearts"
10th Mar 2024 1:12pm
Don't I know it and you're more eloquent than me.
Solid exquisiteness
BIG LIKE
Solid exquisiteness
BIG LIKE
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