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why is it?
did you ever notice
that which loves us
too often leaves
us far behind
and that which does
not love us often holds
on for dear life?
Published 20th Dec 2023
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20th Dec 2023 5:23am
21st Dec 2023 1:48am
Dear BK,
I sure did notice this, and with great irritation I might add. Always a pleasure to see how awesomely, relatable-y and poetically you express human nature.
H🌷
I sure did notice this, and with great irritation I might add. Always a pleasure to see how awesomely, relatable-y and poetically you express human nature.
H🌷
21st Dec 2023 1:49am
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21st Dec 2023 1:51am
20th Dec 2023 1:38pm
Very neatly put. And so true.
Life gives, often beyond what we can handle, and we're left striving to realise the potential life gifted us...
... and as for the rest, distracting hangers-on etc, they try and suck us out.
Life gives, often beyond what we can handle, and we're left striving to realise the potential life gifted us...
... and as for the rest, distracting hangers-on etc, they try and suck us out.
21st Dec 2023 1:53am
There always seems to be more hangers-on sadly enough.
Thank you, Josh.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Josh.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
21st Dec 2023 2:45am
23rd Dec 2023 3:03pm
31st Dec 2023 5:13am
Perhaps toxic traits tend to be more sticky and cling to us.
Thought provoking.
Thought provoking.
31st Dec 2023 2:31pm
