Disarray

hello beautiful I really enjoyed the somber wonder of this write
this morining I am grieving an orchard they are removing to plant baby trees
cycle of life I guess the trees will be missed...

great write 💕

I love orchards. You feel so deeply Crim, that's what makes you so beautiful. Glad you liked the poem.

Nature is the part that we left when we became humans, so we alwasy feel such closeness, such cosy sentiment of belonging to it..
we feel what nature shows sad or happy, so lets follow the life from which we came.
thanks for sharing your quill my friend

I love your comment. I'm deeply in love with nature. Thanks for checking out!

nicely stated delia

Thank you so very much.
Have a good night my friend. 🌙

Interesting contemplation.  It's as if to shed the old, and in wonder of that, gain the appreciation of the new to come, though there could be an emotional myriad to processing this.  It's almost satirical, in finding entertainment in decay, as well as regretful, as well as hopeful, as well as acceptant, and you seem to bundle that together.  It's incredible what can be considered just be looking at nature, heh.  Anyway, also, nice duality in principle in some of your conceptualization.  That's just some of what I picked up on.  Thanks for sharing!

Oh you don't want to leave me alone in nature with a notebook, lol. I look at the world with such curiosity and how can I relate it to me. I feel one with the natural world. I didn't know about the repeat use of the disarray, how that would be. Like when I see the " bramble", that to me looks like a complex emotional entanglement, haha. I like to hear what you take away. I truly appreciate the time you take to write such awesome comments. 😉

What a beautiful poem. That last line is the perfect punctuation for the entirety

Thank you so much for checking out. I did like the way the last line sounded too. 😊
Have a great evening. 🌙