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Awakening
Nothing kills you more than your own thoughts - unknown
Inescapable,
this gnawing ache of the agonized heart.
Inner lotus closed, a non existent pull.
Infinities deep in the existential search,
a melancholy art.
That a truth so profound will seize our soul,
make the ache an awakening.
Now you actually hear the starlings piercing song.
Your enlightenment glistens divine
with angel's tears that clung for so long.
Tears of joy, that you voyaged the stark blackness of your fears.
To emerge and
Newborn thought appears.
Inescapable,
this gnawing ache of the agonized heart.
Inner lotus closed, a non existent pull.
Infinities deep in the existential search,
a melancholy art.
That a truth so profound will seize our soul,
make the ache an awakening.
Now you actually hear the starlings piercing song.
Your enlightenment glistens divine
with angel's tears that clung for so long.
Tears of joy, that you voyaged the stark blackness of your fears.
To emerge and
Newborn thought appears.
Published 10th Dec 2023
Author's Note
Seeking to master my thoughts so I have a more peaceful life.
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10th Dec 2023 5:13pm
Simply beautiful! So deep! I love how inspiring your poem is! What a great poem!
10th Dec 2023 5:16pm
Thank you I wanted to write something that could inspire.
I truly appreciate all your encouragement.
I truly appreciate all your encouragement.
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10th Dec 2023 7:39pm
Aww I'm glad. I've done alot of reading on how our thoughts will master us if we don't master them. I've awakened to a different way of thinking. Yes I still nurse my melancholy thoughts, lol. But I believe you can think your way into hope.
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11th Dec 2023 1:47am
Overthinking is the worst thing you can do in terms of anxiety, at least for me. I try to not allow my mind to do that ( that's my natural inclination to overthink) if it's something beyond my control, I do not overthink it. Thanks so much for reading
11th Dec 2023 11:17am
If we tie our thoughts with good words as soon as they rage, then we fear not depressive thinking..o
an alternate activity will surely erase the haunting images..
thanks you for your sharing your thoughts, a way to stress-killing treatment
an alternate activity will surely erase the haunting images..
thanks you for your sharing your thoughts, a way to stress-killing treatment
11th Dec 2023 11:27am
Hi! I do believe we can battle away bad thoughts. We are what we think. Thanks so much for checking my post out.
14th Dec 2023 10:01pm
Very vivid, lucid, and visual depiction here. You get to the point in how you use analogous metaphor in this. Like you long for truth and purpose, in what's been pondered upon the ages. If such is seemingly obvious, then you know it's concrete and evident, only yet to be discovered. It's as if you see that it could be that way, in how you see it in others, yet they go unknowing of this discovery. Maybe you long for them to see the struggle of your own to find such thoughts. Anyway, that's just some of what I pick up. Maybe I'm wrong. Good job of writing as always.
14th Dec 2023 10:20pm
That was complex ( what I wrote). I guess my wish is our pain transforms into an awakening. That's what my life is at the moment, the lessons I can find in very acute pain. Thank you ever so much for your feedback, I love hearing your thoughts.
