Garrulous Birds

Enjoyed your out of this world write. Nothing wrong with garrulous. I could listen to you all day, Debbie! 😉

It's funny, I stumbled on that word and said wait a minute - am I garrulous, lol
Your comment was so sweet, thank you
Weekend is almost up on us!
Hope yours is a great one!

ME TOO! Thank you... but it's not all about me... even though it usually is, lol. 😉

P.S I agree, 'garrulous' is a great word & you have used it well in this effort.

😊 thank u

keep up the wonderful writing delia

Thank you so much for your kind words, they keep me going.

Splendid write db... I hear them too...

😊 thank u

I learned a new word!  It's some good imagination.

LJ

I actually love love the birds, so I feel bad I called them garrulous, lol. It was a new word to me too. Thank you so much for reading!
Have a great day!

Coffee here is never this interesting! This was a great trip!

Made me smile, thank you. I needed one.
I like to imagine.
Appreciate your comment, have a peaceful night.

This is extremely expressive in metaphor.  I like the descriptions you use of outer space.  I can almost picture you painting the image of your emotional conviction.  The language and depiction are exquisite and particular to your point of view - original.  This has poetry written all over it.  There's some conciseness and brevity, as well, that make it wonderful in transition from emotional standpoint to emotional standpoint.  Overall, a lot of potential is shown here.  Thanks for sharing!  You're getting better and better!

It truly amazes me the way you break down my poem. It is so interesting to me to read your opinion because I can't see those things. You know what is really odd, sometimes when I go back and read my poem later I almost feel like I'm reading someone else's writing. Like something took over me when I wrote it. It's kinda cool.

But thank you so so much for your feedback. I always feel unsure of myself.

Yeah, you almost have to be able to critique your own works from separate points of view, let alone an entirely alienized disposition.  It can really help you brush up on your techniques of observing and defining for self, as well as others.  Anyway, that's what I've found in my own experience.  I always read over my own work in several emotional states.  Denial, doubt, acceptance, inspiration, rebuilding, then I get into new works, and feel an overwhelming ability to create when I write them and I finish them, then I go back to the doubt and denial, thinking I could do better.  Ha-ha, I'm sure you can relate.  With that said, it's good to be aware of such things, and build upon them!