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Encounter of Lust
Break through my shiny membranes.
Strip my soul raw
and stalk me insane.
Sink into my tissues.
Your lustful caw echoes
deep in my brains coves.
You never left but yet I miss you.
Pleasure finally reigns, the exodus of pain.
Make lace of my violin veins
Inhuman sounds in every primal refrain.
You are ecstasy tainted with hell,
If denied possession of you,
in the sweet shackles of my cells.
Strip my soul raw
and stalk me insane.
Sink into my tissues.
Your lustful caw echoes
deep in my brains coves.
You never left but yet I miss you.
Pleasure finally reigns, the exodus of pain.
Make lace of my violin veins
Inhuman sounds in every primal refrain.
You are ecstasy tainted with hell,
If denied possession of you,
in the sweet shackles of my cells.
Author's Note
A little craziness. 😊
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Re. Encounter of Lust
3rd Dec 2023 9:41pm
Your metaphysical erotica is off the chain!!!
Damn what a delight to read!
Whew!!
Damn what a delight to read!
Whew!!
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Re: Re. Encounter of Lust
3rd Dec 2023 9:47pm
Aw, thank you so very much. Writing like that or with crazy metaphors about nature are my fav.
Your comment gave me a huge smile.
Your comment gave me a huge smile.
Re. Encounter of Lust
3rd Dec 2023 9:56pm
These word are so delectable
and divine, Debbie
You wove such a wonderful journey
of ecstasy. I absolutely love this!
Thia
and divine, Debbie
You wove such a wonderful journey
of ecstasy. I absolutely love this!
Thia
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3rd Dec 2023 10:05pm
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3rd Dec 2023 9:56pm
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Re. Encounter of Lust
3rd Dec 2023 11:37pm
Crazy creative is more like it. Cool way of getting intensity of feeling across.
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Re: Re. Encounter of Lust
4th Dec 2023 9:21am
Aw, thank you for your feedback. Yup you got it, it was supposed to reflect intensity of feeling.
Thank you for stopping bye!
Thank you for stopping bye!
Re. Encounter of Lust
4th Dec 2023 11:32am
The kernel of the ecstasy, Powerful language when the feelings reach the extreme
intensity, they bring Poesy..
Have very good times......
intensity, they bring Poesy..
Have very good times......
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Re: Re. Encounter of Lust
4th Dec 2023 11:34am
Thank you ever so much for checking out my post and the nice comment.
Enjoy your day!
Enjoy your day!
Re. Encounter of Lust
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2023 2:58pm
4th Dec 2023 2:35pm
Your crazy has made me a bit hazy.
Ohhh how I love this.
Ohhh how I love this.
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4th Dec 2023 2:47pm
Re. Encounter of Lust
5th Dec 2023 10:16pm
Clever, engaging and beautiful expression of emotions. You knocked it out of the park, my friend!
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Re: Re. Encounter of Lust
5th Dec 2023 10:23pm
😊 that's what I'm doing, smiling
Thanks so much, it really means a lot to me.
Enjoy your night
Thanks so much, it really means a lot to me.
Enjoy your night
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