deepundergroundpoetry.com
D R I Z Z L E
it is only a drizzle
that gently sizzles
a tickle that trickles
giving me a feverish tingle
the sprinkle of the pearly dew
just a few droplets that sparkle
thru' the sun's glare and they twinkle
in the poets view................
it's drizzling and the forest is sinking
in a fairy vibe..on the mountain's side
and the winged ants land to celebrate
this heaven's feast, among the mortals
uprising vocals with every falling drop,
as if human sins vanish, with every breath taken,
with every sigh given, a spirit uplifted into heavens
that sound that spatters and clatters
a flutter of the soul away into the thick mist
a moment of the self evaporation
dissolving, within the drizzling dew
a rapturous Nirvana to leave the flesh
and soar with the spirit's wings upward..
rains that cure the heart sore
and mend the hurting wound
healing every bleeding pore
and brazing the spirit
with heaven' s bliss evermore
https://youtu.be/R-V5NyN9XKo
Published 3rd Dec 2023
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 9
reads 159
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Dec 2023 6:45am
3rd Dec 2023 5:21pm
<< post removed >>
I have just written this one, in haste may be the feeling was intense, just like the Impressionist painters i write on the fly without thinking too much, for i fear the first impression to escape, then i will not catch that fleeting feeling..
thanks heaps for the nice feedback, i am really humbled
be happy my friend.
thanks heaps for the nice feedback, i am really humbled
be happy my friend.
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Dec 2023 6:45am
3rd Dec 2023 5:31pm
<< post removed >>
3rd Dec 2023 5:33pm
i try to be good, with words and with good manners if i can....''..i strive ''
3rd Dec 2023 6:43pm
Spectacular.
I love the sparkly droplets hung on the berries on our tree, the one part of your poem reminded me of that.
Truly gorgeous writing.
I love the sparkly droplets hung on the berries on our tree, the one part of your poem reminded me of that.
Truly gorgeous writing.
So many thanks wrapped within heartfelt wishes
for a bright success and happy future my friend
Have nice times,.
PS/ Beauty comes from Nature clad in raw words
we have to polish this rawness, thats all.
for a bright success and happy future my friend
Have nice times,.
PS/ Beauty comes from Nature clad in raw words
we have to polish this rawness, thats all.
3rd Dec 2023 7:06pm
Thank you so much. I have a very deep love of nature. I need a Walden Pond, lol
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2023 9:46pm
This is very uplifting
and extremely well written
Much respect
Naaj
and extremely well written
Much respect
Naaj
Thank you dear mate, for your constant support to my humble words.Have very good times, and be happy always..P.D
