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Virgin Girls
There is nothing quite like the thrill
Of doing something you’re not supposed to do
Hiding out in the back room of a Church
Getting lost in the heat emanating from
Another girl's lips, bodies pressed against each other
Static and electrified with wanting.
The preachers words, a null and void buzz
A few rooms over. It’s all a meaningless hum
In the way her fingers wrap around my neck
To pull me closer, and the way she trembles
Ever so slightly as I run my fingers down her spine
Her breath catching, as I provoke every tender nerve.
Footsteps in the hallway enough to startle
Mouths not an inch apart, as we wait
Breaths baited, tangled in each other’s limbs
For the opening of the door that never comes
Sighs of relief swallowed in mouths and tongues
To lose ourselves again in each other’s virgin promises.
And Jesus watches from a cross on the wall
Looking down at us, a silent voyeur to our passions
Two girls curled into each other, devouring each other
In a fire that no God could extinguish, or touch could sate
Secret smiles at the end of the service, bright-eyed
Like we’d felt the touch of God, when nothing could be more untrue.
© Indie Adams 2012
Of doing something you’re not supposed to do
Hiding out in the back room of a Church
Getting lost in the heat emanating from
Another girl's lips, bodies pressed against each other
Static and electrified with wanting.
The preachers words, a null and void buzz
A few rooms over. It’s all a meaningless hum
In the way her fingers wrap around my neck
To pull me closer, and the way she trembles
Ever so slightly as I run my fingers down her spine
Her breath catching, as I provoke every tender nerve.
Footsteps in the hallway enough to startle
Mouths not an inch apart, as we wait
Breaths baited, tangled in each other’s limbs
For the opening of the door that never comes
Sighs of relief swallowed in mouths and tongues
To lose ourselves again in each other’s virgin promises.
And Jesus watches from a cross on the wall
Looking down at us, a silent voyeur to our passions
Two girls curled into each other, devouring each other
In a fire that no God could extinguish, or touch could sate
Secret smiles at the end of the service, bright-eyed
Like we’d felt the touch of God, when nothing could be more untrue.
© Indie Adams 2012
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27th Apr 2012 00:59am
"like we'd felt the touch of God, when nothing could be more untrue"
I adore your writing. You have a mind like no other :)
LadyLoss
I adore your writing. You have a mind like no other :)
LadyLoss
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=).
27th Apr 2012 3:13am
Awe
Anonymous
27th Apr 2012 9:31am
A triumph, Miss. And well, I don't need to tell you anymore how much I love this piece. It was the start of your journey.
Your evolution.
Let it be your revolution. x
Your evolution.
Let it be your revolution. x
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re: Awe
27th Apr 2012 9:33am
Thank you very much Miss Sub, I am quite proud of this piece. Revolutions need to start somewhere, and this place was my taste. :)
re: Virgin Girls
Anonymous
27th Apr 2012 5:58pm
Miss Indie (Indie),
You played the thrill and the fear of discovery perfectly. Awesome write!
tornado
You played the thrill and the fear of discovery perfectly. Awesome write!
tornado
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re: re: Virgin Girls
28th Apr 2012 00:50am
Thank you Tornado for your lovely feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the write and that I was able to convey those feelings successfully to receive "awesome write" from you. :)
Indie
27th Apr 2012 6:32pm
re: Indie
28th Apr 2012 00:40am
Classy erotica
28th Apr 2012 6:17pm
Very enticing and you get a real sense of the naughty aspect of what they're doing here. Setting it in a church with Jesus looking down on them is a great touch.
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re: Classy erotica
29th Apr 2012 00:18am
very clean Sexy.
2nd May 2012 1:19pm
wow. you are something special. im glad, and proud to find such a poem. you go girl.
SENA
SENA
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re: very clean Sexy.
Re: Virgin Girls
13th Jun 2012 00:53am
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13th Jun 2012 3:27am
Re: Virgin Girls
2nd Jul 2013 3:30am
really enjoyed the forbidden tone of this piece that started from the very beginning and ended with this fabulous verse...And Jesus watches from a cross on the wall
Looking down at us, a silent voyeur to our passions
Two girls curled into each other, devouring each other
In a fire that no God could extinguish, or touch could sate
Secret smiles at the end of the service, bright-eyed
Like we’d felt the touch of God, when nothing could be more untrue...this was sinfully sexy...very nice...
Looking down at us, a silent voyeur to our passions
Two girls curled into each other, devouring each other
In a fire that no God could extinguish, or touch could sate
Secret smiles at the end of the service, bright-eyed
Like we’d felt the touch of God, when nothing could be more untrue...this was sinfully sexy...very nice...
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re: Re: Virgin Girls
3rd Jul 2013 7:53am
Thank you very much Naajir, for your lovely feedback, much appreciated :) Glad you enjoyed.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: Virgin Girls
21st Aug 2013 7:49pm
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22nd Aug 2013 4:32am
Re: Virgin Girls
25th Dec 2013 9:55pm
I am quite sure
lesbian virgins
love each other more
than the small guy
who sneaks in between
and wants not to be yet seen
his penis is just 4 inches
when hard
he waits another date
when each of you virgins
for another wait
that's the time he can barge in
as his has by then become large
till the second lesbian comes around
once again he is now hard
the church is witness
he has just taken
two virgins
lesbian virgins
love each other more
than the small guy
who sneaks in between
and wants not to be yet seen
his penis is just 4 inches
when hard
he waits another date
when each of you virgins
for another wait
that's the time he can barge in
as his has by then become large
till the second lesbian comes around
once again he is now hard
the church is witness
he has just taken
two virgins
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Re. Virgin Girls
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Apr 2016 2:20am
3rd Apr 2016 2:19am
It's a little disrespectful though, performing such acts in a house of God. It could be perceived as such at any rate.
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Re: Re. Virgin Girls
3rd Apr 2016 3:46am
I believe that can be part of the thrill. Doing something you're not supposed to do, somewhere you shouldn't be doing it. The amount of gay sex that's gone on behind the statues at the Vatican is testament to the "fuck you" people sometimes feel the need to throw out there at religious institutions.
Re. Virgin Girls
Anonymous
6th Apr 2016 3:10am
It may go on dear but that doesn't mean it's right.
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6th Apr 2016 4:09am