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ride
like a morning
dew drops,
the wetness
has spread
between my legs...
N a wild horse
is ready to race...
but care
must be taken
not to slip...
dew drops,
the wetness
has spread
between my legs...
N a wild horse
is ready to race...
but care
must be taken
not to slip...
Written by
dimpy
(dimpsmoon)
Published 24th Nov 2023
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- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
24th Nov 2023 5:06pm
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Re: Re. ride
25th Nov 2023 5:19am
ha ha
thanks tim...well i liked your last poetry so much even i wanted to add in my RL but due to my less entries i could not...well thanks a lot once again for sharing..
thanks tim...well i liked your last poetry so much even i wanted to add in my RL but due to my less entries i could not...well thanks a lot once again for sharing..
Re: Re. ride
25th Nov 2023 5:21am
Re. ride
Anonymous
24th Nov 2023 8:06pm
Short and powerful. Very nice
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Re. ride
25th Nov 2023 00:56am
Re. ride
25th Nov 2023 1:45am
Mmm, this one really has my imagination going wild filling in what might happen next. 😍
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Re: Re. ride
25th Nov 2023 5:26am
Re. ride
Visualisable picture. No wonder Lady Godiva (an English character) rode sidesaddle as her statues (such as in Coventry) show. (It has BTW triggered a poem I have posted in the Story Poem section "I saw her ride".)
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25th Nov 2023 3:16pm
Re. ride
28th Nov 2023 5:56pm
I wouldn't mind being between those beautiful sexy legs. LOL. Keep on writing.
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