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goodbye
You
won't
be able
to take the
whole house with you,
so take a few toys
and the color
of the walls with you...
will anyone
look at you fondly or not?
I don't know,
so take the rainbow
of my eyes with you...
I won't say
goodbye to you
I will see your white aura
from the wet window...
You were
always standing
silently in the dark evenings
so take some naughty waves
of the ocean with you...
You won't be able
to stay in the
same atmosphere forever
so take some seasons with you...
You have seen
a lot of autumn
so carry some white flowers
in that red envelope...
If it becomes dark
somewhere while going
it will be difficult
so keep some fireflies
also in your black palm...
My dry words
will not be able
to say 'I love you' to you..
so one last time
take a warm sip
from my trembling lips...
won't
be able
to take the
whole house with you,
so take a few toys
and the color
of the walls with you...
will anyone
look at you fondly or not?
I don't know,
so take the rainbow
of my eyes with you...
I won't say
goodbye to you
I will see your white aura
from the wet window...
You were
always standing
silently in the dark evenings
so take some naughty waves
of the ocean with you...
You won't be able
to stay in the
same atmosphere forever
so take some seasons with you...
You have seen
a lot of autumn
so carry some white flowers
in that red envelope...
If it becomes dark
somewhere while going
it will be difficult
so keep some fireflies
also in your black palm...
My dry words
will not be able
to say 'I love you' to you..
so one last time
take a warm sip
from my trembling lips...
Published 24th Nov 2023
Author's Note
It is really very difficult to say 'goodbay' to our beloved..it can not even be imagined.
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Thank you T for reading
N I didn't lose.. Just tried to write something emotional...
N I didn't lose.. Just tried to write something emotional...
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Anonymous
24th Nov 2023 8:00pm
This is so heartbreakingly beautiful
25th Nov 2023 3:17pm
Anonymous
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26th Nov 2023 1:30pm
Hey Tim
I am grateful to you...Thank you for inspiring me and giving me confidence by your beautiful words 💗
28th Nov 2023 8:48am
Mega-Talent my friend being able to write something so well done and powerful to affect the reader when it is something that you are just imagining what it would be like to write about :)
Excellent reading as always but no surprise there being whom the poet is that wrote this :)
Excellent reading as always but no surprise there being whom the poet is that wrote this :)
29th Nov 2023 2:29am
Hey Michael
Thanks a lot dear friend for reading n for your inspiring words... Appreciated❤
Thanks a lot dear friend for reading n for your inspiring words... Appreciated❤
28th Nov 2023 5:48pm
It hard to say goodbye to the ones you lost. Keep on writing. I believe in you.
29th Nov 2023 2:27am
1st Dec 2023 3:19am
This is very, very good, Dimpy. Probably your best yet, and definitely my favorite of yours. It's so well done. I am impressed !
1st Dec 2023 3:25am
Hello Styxian
thank you very much for praising me with such beautiful words.. I always try to write in such a way that my readers like it...now I got praise from you so feel like writing is successful..You made my day..thanks..
thank you very much for praising me with such beautiful words.. I always try to write in such a way that my readers like it...now I got praise from you so feel like writing is successful..You made my day..thanks..
