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Take it all off... for me.
There is a catwalk in the club.
There is a pole.
And they come here at night
To see the waves of sex,
To enjoy the naked flesh.
A stripper at a pole
Curls, caresses a snake.
As if he were a pole - a male,
Naked in front of him, a female
Dragging him away
From people's vicious glances,
Wriggling to the rhythm,
With her body saying: "I need it!
I want you! Want to!
Well, take me quickly...
Licking the pole with my tongue,
Hips took the rhythm faster...
The eyes of the men lit up.
After all, they wanted to see...
Themselves in the place of the pole...
She felt very powerful.
Moaning of her surrender.
And from the woman's desire
Everything in the man only grew stronger.
There is a pole.
And they come here at night
To see the waves of sex,
To enjoy the naked flesh.
A stripper at a pole
Curls, caresses a snake.
As if he were a pole - a male,
Naked in front of him, a female
Dragging him away
From people's vicious glances,
Wriggling to the rhythm,
With her body saying: "I need it!
I want you! Want to!
Well, take me quickly...
Licking the pole with my tongue,
Hips took the rhythm faster...
The eyes of the men lit up.
After all, they wanted to see...
Themselves in the place of the pole...
She felt very powerful.
Moaning of her surrender.
And from the woman's desire
Everything in the man only grew stronger.
Author's Note
Who doesn't love a seductive dance on the pole? ;)
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Re. Take it all off... for me.
13th Nov 2023 00:48am
Very awesome poem. Very exulbrant and erotic. I love it. Awesome wording. I love each part of this poem. You did an amazing job with this.
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13th Nov 2023 12:14pm
Wow MP! I do adore your response. Awesome, exuberant, and erotic is perfect. I am so glad you could follow along with me through the seductive pole dance where everyone ends up coming in a private room. :p When a man and a woman come together it's such a beautiful thing.
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13th Nov 2023 12:22pm
Once again your words paint a picture. Rich and lively. . . Your ink spill is, as always, a sexy, sensual, naughty, passionate reflection, of your dreams, of your sweet and loving soul.
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13th Nov 2023 12:39pm
And your words so sweetly mirror those things back to me. I particularly like "your sweet and loving soul". :)
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13th Nov 2023 12:43pm
You fill me with the warmth of your responses to my comment, sweet poet
My tender lust fell silently into your poem....but I "felt" it.....thank you Kristina
My tender lust fell silently into your poem....but I "felt" it.....thank you Kristina
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13th Nov 2023 00:55am
Very sexy read, got to love a sensual pole dance
Hugs and kisses gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
Hugs and kisses gorgeous
Love and light
Ron xx
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13th Nov 2023 12:14pm
I am so happy I could give you something very sexy to read Ron. A lap dance can be a sensual pole dance too and yeah you got to love it. Thanks so much for the hugs and kisses, love and light. And for the compliment too, I adore that. :)
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13th Nov 2023 2:22am
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13th Nov 2023 12:15pm
Yes, some things are pretty obvious, like that bulge in the pants. lol Sigmund Freud does make for an interesting read though. A lot going on there... Thanks so much for dropping by MS.
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13th Nov 2023 2:25am
Are exhibitioners simply exhibitioners or is there some voyeurism within. They maybe the ones getting the ultimate pleasure while performing. But don't be a voyeurist and can't perform as an exhibitionist when she invites you to center stage and the ultimate pleasure. Real sex is being able to perform anytime and any where on command, tight one Lady
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13th Nov 2023 12:16pm
Oh, I think there is always some voyeurism within. And the exhibitionist definitely gets pleasure from all the excitement they cause around them. Oh yes, when she invites you center stage you should definitely be inspired to perform and show her that her efforts have not gone unnoticed. ;) Being able to perform anytime and any where... Hell yeah! What could be more exciting than being grabbed and kissed passionately anytime leading to... * nevermind, naughty look *
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13th Nov 2023 2:35am
Enjoying naked flesh, a woman’s desire and a pole? We do have all the power…
I love this bold sexy poem.
Girl, where’d you find my pic?
I love this bold sexy poem.
Girl, where’d you find my pic?
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13th Nov 2023 12:17pm
And yet we still need the pole so badly that we will do anything for it! ;) Fortunately it only takes a woman's desire to get it and start that dance. I love that you see it as bold and sexy Mary.
Haha, you know just looking for best woman and pole pics to find something that matches and of course your pics come up first. ;)
Haha, you know just looking for best woman and pole pics to find something that matches and of course your pics come up first. ;)
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13th Nov 2023 3:54am
The power, the vibe, the action, it's all here and nobody but you would attempt it so eloquently nude and ready to lick and then slay that dragon. The lights, sweat and haze on the avenue of lust. I love this write and your picture brings this lonesome rider into your oiled flesh and relentless desire...
Success
BIG TORRID LIKE
POLE RL AWARD
Success
BIG TORRID LIKE
POLE RL AWARD
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13th Nov 2023 12:23pm
Oh yes! power, vibe, and action. She likes to be submissive but still likes to be in control sometimes too. ;) So many things are better when attempted eloquently nude right? :p I have found that licking always slays the dragon. But it's even better when you keep the dragon blowing fire just on the edge of total ecstasy until... * nevermind, innocent look * "The lights, sweat, and haze on the avenue of lust" I love how you stated that it really gives me a sexy visual for sure. I knew that was the picture for this the second I saw it. A gorgeous serpentine body is so seductive right?
Love the BIG TORRID LIKE and POLE RL award.
Love the BIG TORRID LIKE and POLE RL award.
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13th Nov 2023 7:54am
Interesting approach to the subject matter, Kristina...
I am working on a thing...
Am thinking of including scenes in strip club...
And an assortment of other depravities...
Which I am thinking of...
But yes, nice red-light write...
I am working on a thing...
Am thinking of including scenes in strip club...
And an assortment of other depravities...
Which I am thinking of...
But yes, nice red-light write...
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13th Nov 2023 12:27pm
Interesting in a good way I hope. ;)
Working on a thing, now that sounds interesting...
I think you should...
What a tease... I am all curious now.
I am sure you can think of quite a lot of them right? ;)
Glad you enjoyed it. Ah I like the term red-light write...
Reminds me of 'Worshiping in red lights'...
Working on a thing, now that sounds interesting...
I think you should...
What a tease... I am all curious now.
I am sure you can think of quite a lot of them right? ;)
Glad you enjoyed it. Ah I like the term red-light write...
Reminds me of 'Worshiping in red lights'...
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13th Nov 2023 10:04am
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13th Nov 2023 12:32pm
Ah yes! it's important to make dreams come true. And like I said dancing on a pole just makes everything in him grow stronger physically and mentally. ;) What could be more motivating than the desire and lust for a naked body. To see her eyes sparkle as... Well you know where I am going. lol The relationship between a man and a woman can be so incredible. And making him feel invincible, now that's something I love.
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13th Nov 2023 12:22pm
Really captures the invisible connection and sexual tension between dancers and watchers. Very sexy.
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13th Nov 2023 12:37pm
Oh yes! that invisible connection can be strong and the sexual tension even stronger. It's easy to tell who someone really connects with, wanting to get closer and spend time with that person. You can cut the sexual tension with a knife. And no doubt there are some private dances to be had that ignite things further. And maybe a private room to really take out the building tension. ;)
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“Pour some Sugar on Me” over the sound system
Ah, as I think, “she really digs me”!
I make an advance; the bouncer says no chance.
She gives you a wink, heck later I’ll buy her a drink.
Session is over, hope she comes over.
Sensuous feline walk, like a fool I gawk.
Vanilla scent and glitter, my hearts a flitter.
“Hi handsome, you gonna buy me a drink?” My wallet is out faster than I can think.
Played me like a fool, a lesson not learned in school.
Now I’m broke, and driving home to stroke.
Later that night, home she goes to her girlfriend’s delight.
You capture the titillating fantasy in your poem. I’m sure many dancers really enjoy the power and control they have over their audience’s lust. And the author shows a fantasy she’d like to or has tried. Not in a club setting but more of a “roleplay”.
Ah, as I think, “she really digs me”!
I make an advance; the bouncer says no chance.
She gives you a wink, heck later I’ll buy her a drink.
Session is over, hope she comes over.
Sensuous feline walk, like a fool I gawk.
Vanilla scent and glitter, my hearts a flitter.
“Hi handsome, you gonna buy me a drink?” My wallet is out faster than I can think.
Played me like a fool, a lesson not learned in school.
Now I’m broke, and driving home to stroke.
Later that night, home she goes to her girlfriend’s delight.
You capture the titillating fantasy in your poem. I’m sure many dancers really enjoy the power and control they have over their audience’s lust. And the author shows a fantasy she’d like to or has tried. Not in a club setting but more of a “roleplay”.
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13th Nov 2023 9:43pm
Well you captured that dynamic really well. Whenever money's involved things tend to change don't they. But you never know maybe she really likes you anyway. :p Perhaps she will even invite you to a private room. (for a lot of money I am sure).
I am sure that a lot of dancers enjoy that power for sure. Having so many men at their beckon call all craving your attention. Who says not in a club setting. wink (okay, not in that type of club setting lol). Oh yes, a fantasy I have tried. I love roleplay and to give a lap dance can be so lush. Feeling that desire rising and intensifying more and more until... oh yeah! the really good stuff that follows when you don't have restrictions of a club...
I am sure that a lot of dancers enjoy that power for sure. Having so many men at their beckon call all craving your attention. Who says not in a club setting. wink (okay, not in that type of club setting lol). Oh yes, a fantasy I have tried. I love roleplay and to give a lap dance can be so lush. Feeling that desire rising and intensifying more and more until... oh yeah! the really good stuff that follows when you don't have restrictions of a club...
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13th Nov 2023 11:38pm
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14th Nov 2023 00:27am
Or maybe a feminist would love it if she just tried it. ;)
Don't give me a frown damnit! smile! :)
Don't give me a frown damnit! smile! :)
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14th Nov 2023 00:29am
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14th Nov 2023 2:16pm
I would want you to take it all off for me my sexy ass lady. Keep on writing.
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14th Nov 2023 3:20pm
They always want me to take it all off. :p But that's definitely a sexy feeling... That really gets me all worked up. Thank you so much for the encouragement Francisco. :)
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14th Nov 2023 4:13pm
I drive by these clubs all the time.
There's one right off the highway in a deserted part of town, sometimes after a long day I'll stop in and see if my favorite dancer is working that night.
I want to think I mean something to her but I know I'm just a John. Still she sets it up nicely for me and well... things happen to make a man wanted for a little while.
You got right into the vibe of need and desire and a little economics too.
I haven't been around much but I always look for you when I'm in DUP town.
Great write KristinaX
There's one right off the highway in a deserted part of town, sometimes after a long day I'll stop in and see if my favorite dancer is working that night.
I want to think I mean something to her but I know I'm just a John. Still she sets it up nicely for me and well... things happen to make a man wanted for a little while.
You got right into the vibe of need and desire and a little economics too.
I haven't been around much but I always look for you when I'm in DUP town.
Great write KristinaX
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14th Nov 2023 4:58pm
Looking for me on the side of the road huh? :p Maybe she really likes you regardless of the financial arrangement part of it. Nonetheless it's an interesting place with interesting people perhaps. And if she can make you feel wanted for a little while and you of course make her feel wanted; although everyone does. Need, desire, and economics often are tied together in one way or another.
Well when you hear that road noise for so long, take a moment to stop and see me. :) I really love that you always look for me and thank you so much for visiting me now.
Well when you hear that road noise for so long, take a moment to stop and see me. :) I really love that you always look for me and thank you so much for visiting me now.
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5th Jul 2024 11:23am
Sometimes I drive a 100 miles off my original destination to come to the club and pray that you’ll be working that night. Yeah, you impressed me so much the first time I stopped by. There was something different in your approach. I look for that in people…
Thank you for giving me a chance to be me and get to know you …
Thank you for giving me a chance to be me and get to know you …
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15th Nov 2023 11:55am
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15th Nov 2023 1:10pm
Damn right! Definitely a great workout. :) And I know you would look super hot on a pole LDF. You know what I mean damnit. lol ;)
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19th Nov 2023 5:39am
How do we put money on this here app?
Yep, you capture the lusting and seductive scenery here with poise and tantalizing spill Ms. K.
Awesome work.
Yep, you capture the lusting and seductive scenery here with poise and tantalizing spill Ms. K.
Awesome work.
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20th Nov 2023 9:19pm
I just wanted to do a seductive pole dance for you guys. ;) Followed by a more seductive lap dance to really stimulate the mind. :p So happy I was able to capture you with lust and seductive scenery. And I always love getting an 'awesome work' you know. Thanks so much Wally. You are a gem.
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21st Nov 2023 10:08pm
Hey there bekochan. I am so glad it felt sexy for you. Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me your thoughts. And welcome to DUP!
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5th Dec 2023 4:45pm
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5th Dec 2023 4:49pm
So happy you thought it was a good write Casket... always ready to take it all off because what could be better than some exhibitionism in private or in public. ;) Oh it's so much fun to engage physically...
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24th Jan 2024 00:25am
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26th Jan 2024 3:30pm
Two of my favorite words, WOW and HOT. ;) I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Vision. I love what you said and there is nothing wrong with being crazy! It keeps things interesting. ;)
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5th Apr 2024 7:06am
Greetings KristinaX, How are ya... Man alive, this takes me back to my mid - late 30s... After a long day of bein a mechanic here in the Arizona heat, goin on down to Venom to drink some pitchers of beer, turkey 101 & Fireball whiskey, really knew how to beat the heat, and just let it melt off... I LOVED talkin to the girls... they have great stories, some goin from club to club, state to stae to work... We were tight enough that, if the bouncers were lazy, an didnt want to collect from guys that refused to pay for dances, they would point them out to me, an I would go collect with interest for the girls... Yes, I used to kick ass pretty hard when I was younger hehehe
We would sit & drink, talk for hours, an I would show the spme of my poetry, from back then, before I started writin darker stuff...
So please tell me, can I buy you a drink, what you drinkin... an what song you like for dancin... Take good care man, and as always... Up the Irons...: wolf... \m/
We would sit & drink, talk for hours, an I would show the spme of my poetry, from back then, before I started writin darker stuff...
So please tell me, can I buy you a drink, what you drinkin... an what song you like for dancin... Take good care man, and as always... Up the Irons...: wolf... \m/
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5th Apr 2024 12:46pm
I am doing fine even if they are trying to bury me alive at work. :p Oh god! the Arizona heat, not sure I could handle that... but it gets pretty damn hot here too but a lot more trees for some shade. That's one way to beat the heat... or perhaps it's just a transfer of heat to other areas... Yes, I am sure the girls have lots of interesting stories and certainly sounds like you were good at making a connection with them... I am sure that your collecting payment with interest for the girls got them all hot and bothered. :p You know all that testosterone and bravado gets things wet every time. lol Of course poetry can do the trick too. Darker stuff? well I will need to check that out; sadly I haven't had much time to read recently. :( As far as what I am drinking, I like a surprise... for someone to choose for me. What would you choose for me? And I can dance to just about anything. :p Maybe some Lasgo - Something or Lords of Acid - Rubber Doll or In This Moment - Blood. So many choices.... but something to get very up close and personal... grinding...
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8th Apr 2024 4:54am
“they wanted to see...Themselves in the place of the pole...”
I didn’t realize this about pole dancing…you learn a thing ever day…
I didn’t realize this about pole dancing…you learn a thing ever day…
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