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beware
look around
you
the garden is dying
all around us
the house is on fire
and the front door
is locked
there is the sound
of marching feet
approaching...
and they're not here
to save us
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Re. beware
12th Nov 2023 11:20pm
Re: Re. beware
12th Nov 2023 11:57pm
Re: Re. beware
13th Nov 2023 4:11am
Re. beware
13th Nov 2023 00:29am
I think we still have some time... But unfortunately too many people are too lackadaisical to correct a crooked path.
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Re: Re. beware
13th Nov 2023 4:13am
Many people don't even realize there is a crooked path. Therein lies the real danger.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. beware
13th Nov 2023 3:07am
Dear BK,
Starkly too true. The omnipresence of danger is all together right around us. Insightfully crafted write as usual. H🌷
Starkly too true. The omnipresence of danger is all together right around us. Insightfully crafted write as usual. H🌷
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Re: Re. beware
13th Nov 2023 4:15am
Thank you, Honoria. As always your insights mean a great deal to me.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. beware
19th Nov 2023 5:15am
An advice we should all heed. We never know what's coming for us.
Great work.
Great work.
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19th Nov 2023 6:32pm
Re. beware
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