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Melt!
Melt my sadness away
why won't you melt it away?
prey for love in vain
say my name like you did
in those lost days
can you melt my heart?
i was frozen from the start
my heart can never open
because inside i'm frozen
please give yourself to me
won't you melt?
with me in hell
we'll both suffer well
it's sacrifice , you see
so please melt with me
it's easier to understand
a heart's thats willing to melt
you don't need no help
just stay with me
and feel the warmth of eternity
why won't you melt it away?
prey for love in vain
say my name like you did
in those lost days
can you melt my heart?
i was frozen from the start
my heart can never open
because inside i'm frozen
please give yourself to me
won't you melt?
with me in hell
we'll both suffer well
it's sacrifice , you see
so please melt with me
it's easier to understand
a heart's thats willing to melt
you don't need no help
just stay with me
and feel the warmth of eternity
Published 25th Apr 2012
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2nd May 2012 6:51pm
Mix the frozen with the fires of hell and what do you get? That seems to be suggested here, although people can argue on and on about whether humans in fact create hell. So to with the reason given for melting, one has to ask is that a good thing to have happen?
3rd May 2012 6:52pm
fire for me doesn't mean hell, it means warmth and comfort so i suppose it is a good thing
3rd May 2012 7:49pm
So when you wrote, "won't you melt?
with me in hell", you were referring to the character in the poem rather then yourself?
with me in hell", you were referring to the character in the poem rather then yourself?
5th May 2012 6:34pm
it's still me ...but i don't see hell in a bad way , like i said for me hell is warmth ...so that's why i said melt rather than burn , melting bonds people together
