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Leaving This Earth
The days, the weeks
the months, the years
they are all numbered
so others can remember
when it was we left.
To think of us
after we have gone
our memories engraved
in their hearts and minds
tears escaping sorrowed eyes.
As we have left this earth
to discover our peace
our souls finding their place
among the stars, the moon
and the heavenly blue skies.
the months, the years
they are all numbered
so others can remember
when it was we left.
To think of us
after we have gone
our memories engraved
in their hearts and minds
tears escaping sorrowed eyes.
As we have left this earth
to discover our peace
our souls finding their place
among the stars, the moon
and the heavenly blue skies.
Published 31st Oct 2023
Author's Note
Written in memory of a loved one that passed away yesterday.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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31st Oct 2023 6:29pm
Dear J,
I’m very sorry to hear of your friend. Your homage to their memory has me thinking on so many levels to ensure I’m in the moment. This is a sorrowful piece but one with love. H🌷
I’m very sorry to hear of your friend. Your homage to their memory has me thinking on so many levels to ensure I’m in the moment. This is a sorrowful piece but one with love. H🌷
31st Oct 2023 6:50pm
