drowned in saltiness...

Tender very beautiful
Love and light
Ron x

Thank you Ron!!

Agreed, beautiful but sad also. Tight one Lady

Thanks much!!

'' he loved her by becoming
the drops of rain
but river's love was blind ''

Whew! That was deep
and so was this entire read.

Thanks for your beautiful response.. I'm glad that you liked..

This is really good, Dimpy. Clever usage of moisturizing elements to try and counter what's dried/brittle. A bit of a sad poem, yes, but well written to where it feels rewarding to read.

Thank you so much for your positive comment.. 😊

You're welcome!  It's a great write!

The love of sadness is interesting.  Always comfort the lady in her time of need.  Keep on writing.

Thanks F for appreciate me..

I will appreciate you my sexy lady.  😘

sometimes tears may wash away things blocking our eyesight

Yaaa
Very true..

This was very beautiful. Good work.

Thanks very much...

You make erotic the mingling of salt water with the coarse river water, makes one think of estuaries in another light.....

I want you to take it in the form of erotic.. Thank you

I take it with gladness, alongside the stirring picture (moment of "what does that remind you of?")

aww woooooow
thanks ss for adding in your RL

😊 I'm so glad you liked it so much.. Thank you for dropping by..