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I'm drowning
It is raining dreams..
and there are ponds of sleep..
I was standing on the shore,
now I am drowning like a stone...
The outside world
is drowning in sunlight...
my heart is drowning in fish bubbles..
I had faith in the surging waves,
now I am sliding like sand in dark depth…
I used to fly like a white butterfly
in the moonlight,
now I'm frozen like a dried drop...
The sun and the romantic dusk
have set up their camp
till now I was floating
on the petals of flowers
now I am drowning
in the veins of thorny branches…
In the light of my pendant
I was searching for the ways of life
now I am drowning in the eyes of my reflection...
and there are ponds of sleep..
I was standing on the shore,
now I am drowning like a stone...
The outside world
is drowning in sunlight...
my heart is drowning in fish bubbles..
I had faith in the surging waves,
now I am sliding like sand in dark depth…
I used to fly like a white butterfly
in the moonlight,
now I'm frozen like a dried drop...
The sun and the romantic dusk
have set up their camp
till now I was floating
on the petals of flowers
now I am drowning
in the veins of thorny branches…
In the light of my pendant
I was searching for the ways of life
now I am drowning in the eyes of my reflection...
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17th Oct 2023 5:46am
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17th Oct 2023 12:11pm
You do have a way with the pen.
Erotic wonderland often and then a sensitive write ...
Phenomenal
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Erotic wonderland often and then a sensitive write ...
Phenomenal
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17th Oct 2023 12:21pm
I like to write on both.. although I am a person who likes both of the things...well thanks n waiting for your new stuff!!
Re. I'm drowning
17th Oct 2023 1:29pm
This write has a rather morose feel to it. A lot of us around the World feel especially worried & unhappy at present as society continues to lose its way.
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17th Oct 2023 2:12pm
You are absolutely right snaggy...people are wandering in the breathtaking city... People are losing their existence..
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2023 1:56pm
The imagery in this is amazing. Nicely done!
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17th Oct 2023 2:13pm
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17th Oct 2023 9:20pm
Sometimes you gotta lose your idea of self in the oceans of time...it hurts but it's part of the process. Beautiful word imagery as usual.
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20th Oct 2023 5:16am
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20th Oct 2023 5:44am
Yes...I drowned in the reflection of my eyes.. which was very unbelievable for me. n yaa I hid my smile in my palm so as not to be seen... Well thank you so much for taking the time to read me.. It's pleasure..