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Enter
Do you enter of your own free will
The darkness within is where I choose to chill
Does the smell of black mold and dead blood draw you in
Does that taste of vomit in your mouth remind you of your sins
Do you enter of your own free will
As I slowly approach you from behind and with a small nick blood is spill
As we all dine on the feast that you’re providing us
After this suckling fest you will become one of us
Do you enter of your own free will
Do you dare to participate and feed from this kill
To savagely tear at it’s flesh and feed off of it’s screams
Extending your fangs and nails as you enter their dreams
Do you enter of your own free will
Entering and adding to the darkness is how you pay your bills
Yes tearing through throats in a blood frenzied lust
Feeding and squeezing their throats until every blood vessel bust
Do you enter of your own free will
Hahaha, tear open that fucking chest, I mean really feel the thrill
Rip out that heart and squeeze it by it’s body and neck
Grab a straw or us your tongue down in the cavity where the blood collects
Again I ask, do you enter of your own free will
The things that I will teach you are so far beyond a red or blue pill
But you must give me your consent, you must agree to be release
You must be lead into the darkness while holding hands with the beast
The darkness within is where I choose to chill
Does the smell of black mold and dead blood draw you in
Does that taste of vomit in your mouth remind you of your sins
Do you enter of your own free will
As I slowly approach you from behind and with a small nick blood is spill
As we all dine on the feast that you’re providing us
After this suckling fest you will become one of us
Do you enter of your own free will
Do you dare to participate and feed from this kill
To savagely tear at it’s flesh and feed off of it’s screams
Extending your fangs and nails as you enter their dreams
Do you enter of your own free will
Entering and adding to the darkness is how you pay your bills
Yes tearing through throats in a blood frenzied lust
Feeding and squeezing their throats until every blood vessel bust
Do you enter of your own free will
Hahaha, tear open that fucking chest, I mean really feel the thrill
Rip out that heart and squeeze it by it’s body and neck
Grab a straw or us your tongue down in the cavity where the blood collects
Again I ask, do you enter of your own free will
The things that I will teach you are so far beyond a red or blue pill
But you must give me your consent, you must agree to be release
You must be lead into the darkness while holding hands with the beast
Written by
I_IS_ME
Published 14th Oct 2023
| Edited 16th Oct 2023
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Re. Enter
14th Oct 2023 7:55pm
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14th Oct 2023 8:05pm
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15th Oct 2023 00:59am
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15th Oct 2023 3:51am
Super sorry dude for the slow response, but we got caught up there for a moment. Thanks for read and comment, Much appreciation dude
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15th Oct 2023 1:32pm
Thanks for responding back I appreciate that very much with respect 👊 for your talents to write insightful story to read keep on writing those words ✍️
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15th Oct 2023 11:38pm
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16th Oct 2023 8:04pm
This would be one of my personal motivational speech if i was a vampire or serial killer.
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16th Oct 2023 8:19pm
Hahaha, dude you're a wild man. We tried to make a point with this piece that committing a sin is by choice. Thanks a ton dude
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17th Oct 2023 4:56am
Love me some creepy and thrilling vampire reads! Perfect for this time if year or in July as well. Nicely done. <3
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17th Oct 2023 5:10am
We still feel like we have to do one better for the holiday. We're most likely going to write something else for the occasion. Thanks a ton Lady
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17th Oct 2023 5:11am
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2nd Nov 2023 7:47pm
I read this of my own free will, and was as great as it was sinister. Loved it!
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2nd Nov 2023 8:03pm
Hahaha, we really appreciate you reading and commenting on this piece, much appreciation
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18th Feb 2024 10:58pm
Greetings man; such brutal honesty, there is a beauty within the gloom & the dark... Dont know... Do you guys have donuts
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18th Feb 2024 11:03pm
Hahaha, doughnut and darkness are usually provided. Thanks for the read and comment dude
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24th Mar 2024 4:30am
Alright man, rolled the dice of fate that the voices told me to do... landed 10s... an read your 10th poem down, 10 times, an man it just keeps gettin better an better each time read... have read that this is about vampires, but honestly, it also sounds like it could be Cenobites from Hellraiser... Keep on keepin on man...
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24th Mar 2024 4:34am
Thanks dude for all of your support, please checkout my man CS who's going postal with his new pieces
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24th Mar 2024 4:39am