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this abstract life
humbly
i chose it
knowing the stream i swim in will never be main
still the stillness
color and scope
bring me honor
i present myself to thee
lower case
higher mountains to climb
the challenge is worthy
welcome the journey
to vistas unknown
i chose it
knowing the stream i swim in will never be main
still the stillness
color and scope
bring me honor
i present myself to thee
lower case
higher mountains to climb
the challenge is worthy
welcome the journey
to vistas unknown
Author's Note
watercolor painting by Poetspeak
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Re. this abstract life
3rd Oct 2023 12:44pm
Life is like colorful mountains..not everyone can climb easily..some reach the top..some remain at the bottom... N yaa your painting...it's beautifully painted..
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3rd Oct 2023 12:54pm
It's such an amazing journey dimpy.
I've only scratched the surface.
I thank you kindly for your gracious comments and support.
They keep me creating...
❤
I've only scratched the surface.
I thank you kindly for your gracious comments and support.
They keep me creating...
❤
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3rd Oct 2023 1:10pm
We are each other's source.. which forces us to write new things.. which increases hope...which gives happiness.. Keep sharing 🥰
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3rd Oct 2023 1:19pm
Yes, we are blood and creation.
We must keep trying new paths and moving forward...
TY
We must keep trying new paths and moving forward...
TY
Re. this abstract life
3rd Oct 2023 1:32pm
You always take me on a journey with your art! Worth the challenge indeed! Big like!
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3rd Oct 2023 1:41pm
That's what makes the path wonderful, having riders along for the journey 😀
Thanks so much Willow.
You inspire me as well !
Thanks so much Willow.
You inspire me as well !
Re. this abstract life
3rd Oct 2023 1:35pm
Dreamy, peaceful, mysterious.... the colours and the words. Beautiful stuff. Never stop creating...
❤️k
❤️k
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3rd Oct 2023 1:43pm
As long as I have the honor to create, I will.
Rest assured there's plenty left in my creative tank !!
Appreciate your encouragement always Red.
Thanks ✋ ❤💯
Rest assured there's plenty left in my creative tank !!
Appreciate your encouragement always Red.
Thanks ✋ ❤💯
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3rd Oct 2023 1:57pm
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3rd Oct 2023 2:11pm
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I feel at home in the abstract life.
I appreciate your comment, means a lot to me !
Thank you Sir Robert
I appreciate your comment, means a lot to me !
Thank you Sir Robert
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3rd Oct 2023 2:33pm
PS: never heard that expression before. I take it it means something positive............
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3rd Oct 2023 5:38pm
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2023 3:14pm
Hiya Poet,
Love your beautiful pen.
Take care.
X
Love your beautiful pen.
Take care.
X
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3rd Oct 2023 7:18pm
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Re. this abstract life
4th Oct 2023 2:36am
We climb the woman and she reach her peak and gets wet in her panties/thong. Keep on writing.
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4th Oct 2023 3:16am
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2023 3:57am
Poet Speak Re-born
I like the limpid lyricism--clear and cool like a stream in summer.
The repetition of word-parts reinforces the mirroring / re-fracting quality of water.
Enjoyed!
I like the limpid lyricism--clear and cool like a stream in summer.
The repetition of word-parts reinforces the mirroring / re-fracting quality of water.
Enjoyed!
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4th Oct 2023 12:17pm
Good to see you Mark !
Yes, as much as I feel like I've said enough in my poet journey, there's always more.
This stripped down version identifies me.
Called on my art visions for help.
I dig your comment
Especially this line
Poet Speak Re-born
Feels like a Parsons Award
I'll take it
Thanks ✋
Yes, as much as I feel like I've said enough in my poet journey, there's always more.
This stripped down version identifies me.
Called on my art visions for help.
I dig your comment
Especially this line
Poet Speak Re-born
Feels like a Parsons Award
I'll take it
Thanks ✋
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4th Oct 2023 6:33am
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4th Oct 2023 12:18pm
Dear H,
Dig the Dig and the BIG
The comment is everything to me
Mucho thanks H
🤠❤
Dig the Dig and the BIG
The comment is everything to me
Mucho thanks H
🤠❤
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2023 7:17pm
'' knowing the stream i swim in will never be main ''
indeed!!
much respect
Naaj
indeed!!
much respect
Naaj
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4th Oct 2023 7:51pm
Re. this abstract life
25th Oct 2023 00:21am
What will your identity be in the Garden on Wednesday, 10/26/23 at 7PM, when the Cs come to town to open the season for both teams?
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25th Oct 2023 00:48am
Boy, that's a tough call.
I think the C's will be kicking some butt.
My nephew is visiting from Western Mass, gonna be fun ! Knicks have a glut of guards and not many big men.
I think the C's will be kicking some butt.
My nephew is visiting from Western Mass, gonna be fun ! Knicks have a glut of guards and not many big men.
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28th Oct 2023 00:43am
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