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Mantra
If this is my ego I want it to break
To see past myself, I need it to break
If this is the world I want it to break
To build something new we need it to break
If this is what life is I want it to break
We're not made for this, to live it must break
If this is sustaining us I want it to break
It poisons itself, we must make it break
To see past myself, I need it to break
If this is the world I want it to break
To build something new we need it to break
If this is what life is I want it to break
We're not made for this, to live it must break
If this is sustaining us I want it to break
It poisons itself, we must make it break
Published 21st Sep 2023
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For the competition of the same name.
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22nd Sep 2023 2:12am
This is a really cool write. It has a great rhythm to it as well as the (not too) aggressive approach.
Awesome poem.
Awesome poem.
