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the moments in which i wanna be imprisoned forever..!
eyes beckoned
my lips touched his lips
we did a wonderful meditation
in those moments
we forged synergy
of heart and soul...
my lips touched his lips
we did a wonderful meditation
in those moments
we forged synergy
of heart and soul...
Published 21st Sep 2023
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21st Sep 2023 12:24pm
If you have the synergy, so much can happen ...
Your soul is showing dimpy ....
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Your soul is showing dimpy ....
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21st Sep 2023 12:30pm
Hey artist
Thank you for your beautiful feedback..
Your appreciation not only encourages me to writing, but it also validates the efforts..
Thank you for your beautiful feedback..
Your appreciation not only encourages me to writing, but it also validates the efforts..
21st Sep 2023 12:34pm
It's a long road with no final destination.
I'm glad my feedback keeps you writing.
Validation is something we all need.
You've earned high marks here and you will continue to because your writing is honest, sexy and sensual. You know your heart and you share it generously...
I'm glad my feedback keeps you writing.
Validation is something we all need.
You've earned high marks here and you will continue to because your writing is honest, sexy and sensual. You know your heart and you share it generously...
well I like to look the way I'm. n yaa I always need people like you... so that I can spend 10 years on this platform like you...
21st Sep 2023 12:49pm
Would look to me like the kind of moment you want lasting forever. Romantic piece.
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23rd Sep 2023 6:16am
Happiness is not possible without synergy. It is important to maintain coordination with people, nature and its gifts.,well thanks F
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23rd Sep 2023 6:18am
Yes of course...such small moments last a long time...which keep a smile on the face all the time...thank you for your nice comment!
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