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Remembering Eternity
Her skin was smooth like butter cream.
Luscious entry to his dream.
Begging, pleading to be tasted.
To be pasted,
all over the walls of his thoughts.
Her heart's city of inhibition crumbles and falls
Her black lined eyes, alive and iridescent with haunting desire.
With a slow ache and burn like torches of fire.
Lips taste like destiny, remembering eternity.
Luscious entry to his dream.
Begging, pleading to be tasted.
To be pasted,
all over the walls of his thoughts.
Her heart's city of inhibition crumbles and falls
Her black lined eyes, alive and iridescent with haunting desire.
With a slow ache and burn like torches of fire.
Lips taste like destiny, remembering eternity.
Published 19th Sep 2023
| Edited 25th Sep 2023
Author's Note
To be continued
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19th Sep 2023 12:19pm
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19th Sep 2023 2:39pm
so dreamily beautiful lovely Debbie it wrapped round me and I tasted its essence 💕
19th Sep 2023 2:46pm
You are such a beautiful person, it's an honor to have touched you. Thank you
19th Sep 2023 3:39pm
This may attract the perves... whoops! No, it's great. I prefer whipped cream but I'd settle for butter. 😉
19th Sep 2023 3:56pm
I prefer whip cream too 😛
Thank you for always reading my work.
You make me smile.
Thank you for always reading my work.
You make me smile.
19th Sep 2023 5:59pm
Very expressive, particularly metaphorically. You use conceptualization to capture the "mood" with every line. It's like the "emotion" comes to invade and plunder all of the riches! Ha-ha. Anyway, thanks for sharing!
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