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GUIDE ME
When we come to screw,
guide me inside you.
Come reach out your hand
to my magic wand.
My sweet seductress,
be my instructress.
You know your body:
in its ways teach me.
Together we'll learn,
as our desires burn,
how well we both fit,
my cock in your slit.
guide me inside you.
Come reach out your hand
to my magic wand.
My sweet seductress,
be my instructress.
You know your body:
in its ways teach me.
Together we'll learn,
as our desires burn,
how well we both fit,
my cock in your slit.
Published 18th Sep 2023
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18th Sep 2023 6:36am
aabb rhyme scheme can be a challenge with longer writes. Perfect for the brevity found here. The tone suggested a bit of Bill Withers' "Use Me".
18th Sep 2023 6:00pm
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18th Sep 2023 9:44pm
I thought you knew all there was to know about eroticism & such? You must be very experienced but I also detected an enticing modesty about you within the 3 stanzas. 😊
My experience is more in the writing of them than doing what is in them LOL. I intentionally wrote it as if they were the words of someone about to do it with a new lover for the first time together, first time for him but not for her. A giving away into the arms of experience.
Anonymous
19th Sep 2023 8:16pm
This is very relatable erotica
very well expressed
very well expressed
