Autumn of Defeat

Excellent… really enjoyed this one..,

Thank you with a big smile..... 😊

This made me so sad this morning…you have a true talent my friend. I’m always looking for your poems when I check my Updates :)

It was written from my own sadness.
I was going to give up posting for awhile, but I could not stay away.
Hearing you like my poems only makes me want to write more. Hugs 💖

Don’t EVER stop💕

Thank you so much. Same goes for you. 💜

This is a very good write deliabear (Debbie)
I hope the leaves are turning and your ink is burning this fine Saturday morning

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Aww, thanks so much.
I do feel inspired.

Have a great weekend!

Very beautiful. Great rhyming.

Hello, thx so much for stopping by to read.
Have a lovely weekend!

Autumn won't defeat you, it's just the beginning! Can't wait for more of your Autumnal writes... even if I have to! ;-)

Hello you! I guess I think of leaves descending as being defeated in this poem. I do go pretty wild writing about the changing & falling leaves. Then it's on to skeletal trees. 😊
Enjoy your weekend

Makes perfect sense. This reminds me, I was in Kew (botanical) Gardens in London a few years back now, with my daughter & we were trying to catch the leaves as they fell. We were a good 5 minutes trying to do that but we just couldn't. They fell from a great height & evaded us at the last second! We got very angry. It was like trying to catch a fly!

😊 🍁🍁🍁

This is quite emotional, visual, metaphorical, expressive.  I'm impressed with your drive on display here.  You have a very concrete core of conviction, and I can just see it amassing with every new post.  Switching up the format was pretty fresh.  It really makes for a clean representation.  Also, your ideas are concise and organized, in this format.  Some deep inquisition and disposition in what you convey is present here.  Like some grand harvest, beckoning for a purpose, found in the sadness of the loss of life and/or love.  The definitive association of vocabulary is solid too, building up to each particular reference of metaphor.  Individual, original, unique to you.  Anyway, these are some of the things I picked up on.  Hope this helps - thanks for sharing!

Thank you ever so much for such a detailed critique. I cannot see the poem from your perspective. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. It is utterly so cool.
Have a peaceful night

hello beautiful Debbie this filled me with longing
even when we concede defeat to a season
a renewal is underway...

you are lovely it will always be 💕

Hi!! Thx so much for reading.
The leaves are defeated to autumn as sometimes a deep belief stands in defeat.
Renewal of the earth will come and for our own spirits.
I love hearing from you!!!! ❤️