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I'm So Glad That Mom And Dad Are Not Here
"I'm so glad that Mom and Dad are not
here to see us like this." was what
Kelly whispers to David
while they walk naked on
the beach with no one
else looking at
them with shock
in their
eyes.
here to see us like this." was what
Kelly whispers to David
while they walk naked on
the beach with no one
else looking at
them with shock
in their
eyes.
Published 8th Sep 2023
Author's Note
In this nonet poem, one half of a couple whispers something in the ear of the other half while they walk on a local beach in a certain way.
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8th Sep 2023 6:14pm
8th Sep 2023 8:09pm
I echo Robert3041's comment - that could be another caption for the picture.
I might volunteer as another caption choice, noting the downward glances - "You know, things feel a lot different when you've shaved".
I might volunteer as another caption choice, noting the downward glances - "You know, things feel a lot different when you've shaved".
8th Sep 2023 8:10pm
