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DUNE
“Once men turned their thinking over to machines
in the hope that this would set them free.
But that only permitted other men
with machines to enslave them.”
― Frank Herbert, Dune
When they released the remake of Dune
it took me the longest time to watch;
in protest, I eschewed the very thought
that a remake could be more astute
than an original, 1984 classic.
But critics and fans soon negated
my obstinate doubt.
I realized I was being closed
-minded and judgmental
over something I knew nothing about.
Because patriarchy assumes all forms
and openly exists
throughout the world
destroying the old for the new.
Somewhere on Earth
there is someone
whose face is behind a computer
screen amid an office cubicle.
Their palms pressed
into the wood of their desk
so hard they stain its surface.
Blood trickling backward
from a tooth-pierced tongue.
They've spent a lifetime
trying to conserve the water
of their tears and sweat,
breaking their back
for whatever corporate moguls
demanded of them.
They believe so strongly
that someday a prophecy will come to pass.
One that will deliver them
from the grasp of oligarchs
dumbing down the masses.
“It is so shocking to find out
how many people do not believe
that they can learn,
and how many more believe
learning to be difficult.”
Yet they look up and wait
to be delivered.
Last week, someone
died in a protest against the machine.
They just lay there,
cradled within an arid energy,
feeling the last bit of humanity
caterpillaring out
through the stillsuit
of their veins.
Somewhere there’s another
perhaps on a street corner
holding a sign as a weapon:
“Fear is the mind-killer”
Their fingers wrapped as tentacles
around the last bit of truth
written on dirty cardboard
in permanent marker.
And yesterday
someone hid their despair
behind sunglasses
and a smile full of teeth
before walking into a desert
named suicide with nothing to drink.
Others just stood there
cradled in the tragedy
of a wasted life
not understanding why
they couldn’t be saved.
But friendship can feel like a cage
where one must conform
to everything being okay.
What good is living a cliche
under constant oppression of a clique
“When the real universe
is always one step beyond logic.”
Rebellion is a creation
of freedom, a form of moisture
forming an impossible arboretum,
an oasis of knowledge
in the desert.
Each individual creation
can bend space and time
to mine the spice
that sustains their life.
All the creator needs to do
is to find the right moment
to push back
and conquer the giant.
All we need to do
is allow the shock
of their action
to bear witness
to a different direction
by a new generation.
Trust that they exist
for such a moment as this.
Because sometimes necessity dictates
the old be destroyed
so that new can be born.
“The sleeper must awaken.”
refers to those who believe
they are chained to a desk;
and those looking up, waiting
instead of learning
and creating.
But mostly those who are closed
-minded, infected with judgment and doubt
over things we know nothing about.
~
in the hope that this would set them free.
But that only permitted other men
with machines to enslave them.”
― Frank Herbert, Dune
When they released the remake of Dune
it took me the longest time to watch;
in protest, I eschewed the very thought
that a remake could be more astute
than an original, 1984 classic.
But critics and fans soon negated
my obstinate doubt.
I realized I was being closed
-minded and judgmental
over something I knew nothing about.
Because patriarchy assumes all forms
and openly exists
throughout the world
destroying the old for the new.
Somewhere on Earth
there is someone
whose face is behind a computer
screen amid an office cubicle.
Their palms pressed
into the wood of their desk
so hard they stain its surface.
Blood trickling backward
from a tooth-pierced tongue.
They've spent a lifetime
trying to conserve the water
of their tears and sweat,
breaking their back
for whatever corporate moguls
demanded of them.
They believe so strongly
that someday a prophecy will come to pass.
One that will deliver them
from the grasp of oligarchs
dumbing down the masses.
“It is so shocking to find out
how many people do not believe
that they can learn,
and how many more believe
learning to be difficult.”
Yet they look up and wait
to be delivered.
Last week, someone
died in a protest against the machine.
They just lay there,
cradled within an arid energy,
feeling the last bit of humanity
caterpillaring out
through the stillsuit
of their veins.
Somewhere there’s another
perhaps on a street corner
holding a sign as a weapon:
“Fear is the mind-killer”
Their fingers wrapped as tentacles
around the last bit of truth
written on dirty cardboard
in permanent marker.
And yesterday
someone hid their despair
behind sunglasses
and a smile full of teeth
before walking into a desert
named suicide with nothing to drink.
Others just stood there
cradled in the tragedy
of a wasted life
not understanding why
they couldn’t be saved.
But friendship can feel like a cage
where one must conform
to everything being okay.
What good is living a cliche
under constant oppression of a clique
“When the real universe
is always one step beyond logic.”
Rebellion is a creation
of freedom, a form of moisture
forming an impossible arboretum,
an oasis of knowledge
in the desert.
Each individual creation
can bend space and time
to mine the spice
that sustains their life.
All the creator needs to do
is to find the right moment
to push back
and conquer the giant.
All we need to do
is allow the shock
of their action
to bear witness
to a different direction
by a new generation.
Trust that they exist
for such a moment as this.
Because sometimes necessity dictates
the old be destroyed
so that new can be born.
“The sleeper must awaken.”
refers to those who believe
they are chained to a desk;
and those looking up, waiting
instead of learning
and creating.
But mostly those who are closed
-minded, infected with judgment and doubt
over things we know nothing about.
~
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