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starlit
it's twilight inside
it's too dark to see now
I reach out to feel your soul
and I can't find you
in my chambers weep
it's too cold here
I sing myself to sleep
where I can dream of starlight
twin stars finding each other in the night
where the dawn doesn't interrupt
and awaken my happiness with sadness
where ghosts don't lurk
and I don't have to be anybody but me
lying with you
our souls touching
and the dark fades away
the light of your smile caresses
and all is right again
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 26th Aug 2023
| Edited 27th Aug 2023
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Re: Re. starlit
26th Aug 2023 4:20pm
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26th Aug 2023 4:52pm
Starlight captures my heart and soul
Two equals, you and me,
As we enjoy a night full of romance
Red roses, red roses a dozen in all
Laughter in each other's small jokes
It's the little flirtations we do as lovers
Giving each other the gift of happiness
Here in our heart, 'twined into but one
Tonight's, a night of love under starlight
Two equals, you and me,
As we enjoy a night full of romance
Red roses, red roses a dozen in all
Laughter in each other's small jokes
It's the little flirtations we do as lovers
Giving each other the gift of happiness
Here in our heart, 'twined into but one
Tonight's, a night of love under starlight
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26th Aug 2023 5:17pm
Re. starlit
26th Aug 2023 10:02pm
Seems many of us are writing about love lately, even Stoney, lol but maybe he always did, hehe. Maybe I'm just more receptive to it presently. I'm certainly feeling the tenderness & kindness that's out there this week for sure. Your poem is no exception, crimsin, in fact, it's exceptional! 😊
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Re: Re. starlit
27th Aug 2023 00:35am
hello dearest Billy it's beautiful you are also writing of love and that you're in the mindset to read of love...thank you for reading and sharing with me 💕
Re. starlit
26th Aug 2023 11:41pm
Those twilight tucked corners seem to house the most beautiful moments. Gorgeous write, Brenda 😊
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