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A Moment In The Abstract
call it what you want
intrigue...fascination...infatuation
to me it's the unexplained..
the manner in which you get in tune with your intuition
the way a lost man can suddenly find himself at world's end
swirling down your Calypso's abyss
Davey Jonesin for your mysticism
where worlds collide and words coincide as
Venus-Earth-Mars
we meet somewhere in the middle
showcasing artists in the nude
riddled with antiquated aches and seismic pulsings
deep diving into the inkwell..the pitch blaque of it
spilling esoteric..spelling out spells through raw sentiment
emotionally charged..waxing rhapsodic
high glossed in poetically saturated melodies
as we indulge fine dining here
at the abstract cafe
let me fill in your blanks
pour you another serving perhaps?
taste my nuances with no chaser..see if they're to your liking
i'll keep writing as long as you remain open
to the curvature of my verbiage
be my one stop shopping
cuz this is a non-stop thing for me
the final destination is just one journey after the next
that roams inside your labyrinth
dedicated to pulling the muse from out your pores
one molecule at a time..one letter at a time
using countless strokes of the quill
to nudge your nucleus
to ART-iculate you
to etch n sketch your quintessence
until it fits the mold i have in mind for us
displayed openly as an exhibition of exhibitionists
pasted against the ambiance of a picturesque panorama
highlighting my incubus. .your succubus
smothered..simmering between sheets of opaqueness
telling a tale of heat seekers rising up the Fahrenheit scale
with yearnings burning ink as the midnight oil
til nothing remains but the smoldering embers of
two trailblazers outlined in greyed chalk
the obsidian dust
that is the shape of our poetry
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Published 25th Aug 2023
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25th Aug 2023 7:28pm
Yes, yes, yes, and oh my gods, yes! This is the essence of poetry. I'm all outta words here now but I'm keeping this beauty.
25th Aug 2023 10:08pm
Snaps to you. ♥ Damn is all I can say, I am in awe the flow of your words, Damn goodness gracious I think I need a cigarette (lol) jk. But well written King, well written.. 👑
25th Aug 2023 10:31pm
26th Aug 2023 2:09am
26th Aug 2023 10:31pm
Naajir, the smile this brought me is felt to the core. I love it! I also think it would be fantastic as a spoken-word poem with such a great rhythm and flow. Thank you for sharing it with us!
--B
--B
17th Sep 2023 2:56pm
I really enjoyed the rhythm, flow and the message I took from this.
Hope your Sunday is alive with possibility.
Bat
Hope your Sunday is alive with possibility.
Bat
