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RIP
to see a smile from your face
to erase yesterday
would I take you from your place,
if we could but change fate?
in the heavens you now reside
I hope you're at peace
my friend I guess it was your time
I didn't see it coming
I missed you the other day
I know you kind of had a feeling
I liked you in special way
we never talked about it really
I guess I always thought there'd be a day
where I could confess to you I was feeling you
too young you left this world
a good guy who showed me kindness in a cold world
the stars shine brighter in heaven because of you
the earth is missing an angel
you left too soon
RIP
Author's Note
for a good friend RIP
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Re. RIP
25th Aug 2023 5:00pm
Nothing hurts worse than a angel falling down, leaving memories in dreams with tears of yesterday's laughs, unveiling the emotions. Great poem, seriously.
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25th Aug 2023 7:22pm
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25th Aug 2023 7:23pm
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25th Aug 2023 7:23pm
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25th Aug 2023 5:44pm
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25th Aug 2023 8:20pm
As always dear Poetess and Queen 👑 it's so hard to say goodbye yet as long as you hold on to the memories you will always remember the process of the love and happiness and joy that they have brought to your life and the memories will always last FOREVER 🪷👊🙏👍 FORSHO INDEED
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25th Aug 2023 8:45pm
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25th Aug 2023 5:47pm
Blessings upon blessings 🙏🙏🙏👊💪🪷🪷🪷🌹a wonderful piece very well deserved and written 🤗
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25th Aug 2023 7:25pm
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25th Aug 2023 7:26pm
thank you graciously beautiful Debbie for the love and understanding on this write 💕
Re. RIP
Wonderful memories shared and a truly lovely send off...
I'm so sorry for your loss, dear lady.
(hugs)
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I'm so sorry for your loss, dear lady.
(hugs)
🌹💙
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25th Aug 2023 8:46pm
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25th Aug 2023 9:57pm
Sending you hugs for the loss of your friend, Brenda. It's always too young it seems
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25th Aug 2023 10:03pm
thank you dearest Willow it's true they're always too young he was 36...he died on his motorcycle I appreciate you 💕
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Re: Re. RIP
26th Aug 2023 4:38am
I'm really okay Tim actually I think a bit of shock...I just left with feeling I won't see him again not in this world thank you for caring 💕
Re. RIP
26th Aug 2023 6:47am
I recall you writing in the past about a friend...
Perhaps this is the same friend...
Very beautiful Crim...
In my opinion...
The love of a lady is the most beautiful thing in the world...
I was dating this lady...
She had a friend who she met in HS...
He was the bouncer of this dance club...
He got life in prison...
This person wrote him until her dying day...
That was some real ass shit...
(She visited me one time in prison...
She passed before I could see her again...
I think of the way her head looked against the pillow,
sleeping on her side, hair spilling all over the place...
She was bipolar...
But I never saw that about her...
I just saw...
Her...
...)
Perhaps this is the same friend...
Very beautiful Crim...
In my opinion...
The love of a lady is the most beautiful thing in the world...
I was dating this lady...
She had a friend who she met in HS...
He was the bouncer of this dance club...
He got life in prison...
This person wrote him until her dying day...
That was some real ass shit...
(She visited me one time in prison...
She passed before I could see her again...
I think of the way her head looked against the pillow,
sleeping on her side, hair spilling all over the place...
She was bipolar...
But I never saw that about her...
I just saw...
Her...
...)
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26th Aug 2023 3:17pm
hello dearest Cipher that's a beautiful memory of your friend no sadly this is not the same person but they were good friends who both rode Harleys this friend died while riding I will miss much like the other man he was very nice to me in a group that always isn't so nice thank you for your care and comment 💕
Re. RIP
15th Sep 2023 9:59pm
Stunning and sentimental. A lot of times we wish we could've talked about those things that lingered in our hearts and minds only to have the time stolen away.
Beautiful tribute. May the memory bring you some comfort.
Beautiful tribute. May the memory bring you some comfort.
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16th Sep 2023 4:39am
hello dearest Wally good evening I still can't believe this person is gone his funeral was just a week ago...he was only thirty five a lady was passing a big rig hit him head on... he was on a motorcycle and that was it... thank you for caring ❤️