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Dreary Day
Overcast
All day
I remember my Mom
Latter years
She'd get so depressed
I'd try to cheer her up
Parkinsons Disease though
There was no cheering
Not even a chance
She was so stoic
Sucked it up
No choice
Today reminds me of those days
Pit of the stomach blues
I'll suck it up too
Go pet my dog
Maybe she'll lick my face
She's good like that
All day
I remember my Mom
Latter years
She'd get so depressed
I'd try to cheer her up
Parkinsons Disease though
There was no cheering
Not even a chance
She was so stoic
Sucked it up
No choice
Today reminds me of those days
Pit of the stomach blues
I'll suck it up too
Go pet my dog
Maybe she'll lick my face
She's good like that
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Re. Dreary Day
24th Aug 2023 11:46pm
It does suck that mom is sick. You have to spend time with her, before she's goes into the heavenly light. Keep on writing.
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25th Aug 2023 1:03am
Unfortunately she has passed on but we had a great relationship with lots of love both ways....
Thx
Thx
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 00:04am
hello dearest Poet this makes me melancholy it is beautiful in its expression
and i love the picture 💕
and i love the picture 💕
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
Thank you Brenda
This was a a year or so before she passed.
We both had / have a lot of mettle.
If she loved you, you were golden and if not, look out ..... A lot of fire 🔥
❤🧡
This picture says it all for me ...
This was a a year or so before she passed.
We both had / have a lot of mettle.
If she loved you, you were golden and if not, look out ..... A lot of fire 🔥
❤🧡
This picture says it all for me ...
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 1:18am
Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 2:08am
Thanks Mary
You never forget and they are with you forever ....often on my shoulder...
You never forget and they are with you forever ....often on my shoulder...
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 1:20am
Hugs, PS I know how it goes. love you. Great to have these kinds of pics for memories! <3
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 2:09am
Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 2:17am
Thats great. My birth person has been mia for years. Im a daddy girl. Hes my hero. happy you had your mom. Its important. <3
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25th Aug 2023 2:20am
Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 2:24am
My mom was ok as a kid, but then lost her brains, Went nuts.
My Pops however is my hero. Hes chatting with me right now! love him, and I pray for my mom.<3
My Pops however is my hero. Hes chatting with me right now! love him, and I pray for my mom.<3
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Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 6:55am
Dear PS,
Lovely pic is right! I can appreciate how difficult it is to keep on moving on some days without those who’ve already gone on. It’s a lovely homage of love to your mom. Very touching write. H🌷
Lovely pic is right! I can appreciate how difficult it is to keep on moving on some days without those who’ve already gone on. It’s a lovely homage of love to your mom. Very touching write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 11:41am
Dear H,
Yes, this picture sums up my family life.
Wish my dad was there too. Recently found a trove of pix while cleaning out a closet.
This one has always been a favorite though.
Appreciate your comment H
Thx
🤠❤
Yes, this picture sums up my family life.
Wish my dad was there too. Recently found a trove of pix while cleaning out a closet.
This one has always been a favorite though.
Appreciate your comment H
Thx
🤠❤
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 8:20am
You are a Bad/Sexy/MF...
:ppp
:)))
(I would do anything for my momma...
:)))
FTW
:ppp
:)))
(I would do anything for my momma...
:)))
FTW
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 11:35am
Gotta take care of your Mom.
Mine was the glue and my foundation.
I was a troubled kid but she loved me nonetheless and I returned that love right up till her end.
Bad and sexy, yeah, IL take that...
Thx C
Mine was the glue and my foundation.
I was a troubled kid but she loved me nonetheless and I returned that love right up till her end.
Bad and sexy, yeah, IL take that...
Thx C
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 8:22am
...
On side note...
I was on this sex site...
Made some friends...
This one cat...
He was from Hawaii...
However...
Had this term...
"Sexy MF"...
This being...
Artistic...
Sensitive...
Individuals...
(You fit this criteria...
Perhaps...
:)
On side note...
I was on this sex site...
Made some friends...
This one cat...
He was from Hawaii...
However...
Had this term...
"Sexy MF"...
This being...
Artistic...
Sensitive...
Individuals...
(You fit this criteria...
Perhaps...
:)
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 11:39am
Yes, sounds like me but I'm not on sex sites anymore except for DUP .... Craigslist back in the day, lots of fun there. It's where I used to post poems and art and it you have that going on SEX follows. Women love trouble and artistic types.
You're pretty sexy yourself C
You got the women around your finger.
Work it son !!
Appreciate your comments and RL
You're pretty sexy yourself C
You got the women around your finger.
Work it son !!
Appreciate your comments and RL
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 2:49pm
Sad. At least you had good time and good memories of her. Regards, Robert.
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25th Aug 2023 4:57pm
I think about her everyday, my dad too.
So many expressions and ways of life.
They worked hard and lived a clean life.
I'm their rogue son but they didn't know that when they were alive ....
So many expressions and ways of life.
They worked hard and lived a clean life.
I'm their rogue son but they didn't know that when they were alive ....
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 3:46pm
My mom used to say "there are days.... and then there are other days." And then she'd sit and look at the rain and listen to sad music with me. Sounds like this was one one of the "other days".
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 4:59pm
Yesterday was a remembrance day.
My mom's birthday is in a few weeks so I always get sentimental around now ....
I know you know K
Thx
❤
My mom's birthday is in a few weeks so I always get sentimental around now ....
I know you know K
Thx
❤
Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 4:24pm
Today is one of those days for me. Its tough all over. Mercury Retrograde they say it is, for the next 2-3 months. Not sure. Don't care! When you lose someone it sticks around a lot longer that any retrograde, long haul inner strength sometimes needs releasing. Let go the past. Let it all out. I get it. Most of my mothers family is dead or only cousins I don't even talk to that hate on me etc... the blues is my middle name. Take care PS.. ((hug))
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
25th Aug 2023 5:01pm
Thanks for the hug K, putting it in my lock box. Families are funky, mine as well but my folks taught me a lot about being humble and I miss them dearly. They are in my thoughts all the time .....
Appreciate your comments on my stuff
Appreciate your comments on my stuff
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25th Aug 2023 5:07pm
Re. Dreary Day
26th Aug 2023 00:55am
PS, this poem celebrates strength, resilience & determination. It's also a majestic salute to everyone who brought these attributes to us! 😊
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
26th Aug 2023 1:28am
Thank you Billy
I was brought up by parents with strong humanism views.. They shaped me and I pay homage....
I was brought up by parents with strong humanism views.. They shaped me and I pay homage....
Re. Dreary Day
15th Sep 2023 9:56pm
Brother, this was a powerful piece, filled with emotion and strength.
Thank you sharing sir.
Thank you sharing sir.
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
15th Sep 2023 10:26pm
Thanks Wally
They never go away, the deceased, they live on in infamy. I'm grateful for that !
They never go away, the deceased, they live on in infamy. I'm grateful for that !
Re. Dreary Day
20th Sep 2023 12:46pm
Really poignant, I have a friend that has done an exercise course for people with Parkinson's for years. It is a nasty villain. Good #2 pencil.
Bat
Bat
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
20th Sep 2023 2:51pm
Yes, terrible disease
Robs one of all joy and will.
Your friend is doing a noble thing for these people.
Thanks Bat
Appreciate your comment 🙏
Robs one of all joy and will.
Your friend is doing a noble thing for these people.
Thanks Bat
Appreciate your comment 🙏
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Re: Re. Dreary Day
20th Sep 2023 6:54pm
My Mom made it to 90 and the last few years were very difficult. Aging sucks but what choice do we have Tim ?
Sorry for your loss as well ...
Sorry for your loss as well ...