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Live my best
Lies reside
Burned into my eyes
Fooled myself
Time to wipe the ashes away
Promises broken
Fell out my mouth, charred and smoking
Years disappeared
Yet hope is still here
I see the sun
Breaking through clouds
Slowly revealed
Removal of the shroud
Life is a prize
When God is my guide
Drugs? I don't need 'em
Ready for freedom
Time to live my best
Burned into my eyes
Fooled myself
Time to wipe the ashes away
Promises broken
Fell out my mouth, charred and smoking
Years disappeared
Yet hope is still here
I see the sun
Breaking through clouds
Slowly revealed
Removal of the shroud
Life is a prize
When God is my guide
Drugs? I don't need 'em
Ready for freedom
Time to live my best
Published 22nd Aug 2023
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22nd Aug 2023 10:28am
What I wish to say is that I hope you will walk your path away from drugs and connected to your own inner light.
This isnt meant as any judgement about anything, its everyones own choice, I just want to say that I wish you all the best
A\R
This isnt meant as any judgement about anything, its everyones own choice, I just want to say that I wish you all the best
A\R
22nd Aug 2023 10:21pm
22nd Aug 2023 10:29am
Nicely done...
You do not need drugs...
(Although I would argue
that everything is a drug...)
:)))
You do not need drugs...
(Although I would argue
that everything is a drug...)
:)))
22nd Aug 2023 10:21pm
