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You've removed the locks from her heart,
Yielding to the yearn for that touch
Yesterday when she sat with you for tea,
Yonder at the YinYang Specialtea cafe~
Yes was the answer she gave
Yet all for those moments till then were
Yours to make now become forevermore,
You've removed the locks from her heart.
Yielding to the yearn for that touch
Yesterday when she sat with you for tea,
Yonder at the YinYang Specialtea cafe~
Yes was the answer she gave
Yet all for those moments till then were
Yours to make now become forevermore,
You've removed the locks from her heart.
Published 20th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Hybrid poem form, I call it an ABC Envelope Stanza. It's my own created form.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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20th Aug 2023 11:44am
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20th Aug 2023 11:58am
Hey Lil D,
Thanks for stopping by. I didn't know so many people were up this early! Thank you for reading and commenting! <3 :)
Thanks for stopping by. I didn't know so many people were up this early! Thank you for reading and commenting! <3 :)
20th Aug 2023 12:33pm
20th Aug 2023 4:56pm
20th Aug 2023 3:42pm
Really a feast for the eyes and if made into an audio could be a feast for the ears as well.
I like the repeated first line, it adds to the lyrical atmosphere. A truly fine creation which I enjoyed reading!
Shine on
A\R
I like the repeated first line, it adds to the lyrical atmosphere. A truly fine creation which I enjoyed reading!
Shine on
A\R
20th Aug 2023 4:57pm
Thanks very much for reading, commenting and most of all for enjoying this poem! <3
