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cater to my will I don't mind
it is a selfishness in me
I try to quiet her bossy voice
but it's no good
I am who I am
a spoiled girl
until you set me straight
and I'm left wanting
hanging on your words
I lap them up like cream
you withhold and I lose my grip
my need outweighs my sense
you feed the fuel and I'm in flames
you give me cutting looks
this encourages me further
you would think there were red flags
but your antagonistic ways turn me on
your stoic demeanor tells me I've touched a hot spot
your curt nods incite lust
I buckle under the weight of your stare
the curl of your lip is cruel
I wonder do you bite when you're really excited
craving your disapproval
will I ever get my way?
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17th Aug 2023 2:05am
This is a great piece of work. It is often hard to find the right wording in erotica. I think you managed that quite nicely. Good write.
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17th Aug 2023 9:53pm
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17th Aug 2023 2:28am
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17th Aug 2023 9:55pm
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I'll happily give you disapproving stares in a smart suit & a reserved demeanor, if that's what you require, lady. I will also happily buy you a coffee! ;-)
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17th Aug 2023 9:56pm
lol I love it dearest Billy thank you for the coffee offer...it's deeply appreciated 💕
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17th Aug 2023 4:46pm
Excellent poem - spoiled girl craving discipline. Exterior demeanor spoiled & cocky while secretly needing to be submissive.
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17th Aug 2023 9:58pm
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6th Sep 2023 3:50am
Like the playfulness intertwined so well with the erotic aspect of it.
Nice work crim
Nice work crim
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7th Sep 2023 5:47pm