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a precious dry rose
A
garden
of redroses
was smiling
in front of me,
but I loved only
the red rose that
died and was
hidden in
my
diary.
Neither
it
was
scented
nor
it
was
to
be
valued.
But for me it was priceless
as it was somehow alive as
a memory in the dilapidated pages..
n I am very happy about..!
garden
of redroses
was smiling
in front of me,
but I loved only
the red rose that
died and was
hidden in
my
diary.
Neither
it
was
scented
nor
it
was
to
be
valued.
But for me it was priceless
as it was somehow alive as
a memory in the dilapidated pages..
n I am very happy about..!
Written by
dimpy
(dimpsmoon)
Published 14th Aug 2023
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Re. a precious dry rose
14th Aug 2023 10:44am
sometimes it is one
simple thing
touches us
burrows
becomes
a precious
memory
simple thing
touches us
burrows
becomes
a precious
memory
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Re: Re. a precious dry rose
14th Aug 2023 10:48am
Re. a precious dry rose
14th Aug 2023 12:06pm
passionate . grerat job on this write
thanks for letting me read and comment
thanks for letting me read and comment
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Re: Re. a precious dry rose
14th Aug 2023 1:17pm
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Re: Re. a precious dry rose
15th Aug 2023 3:44am
Sure
Well The relation of rose and wine is very unique.. Sign of Love n Romance..
Well The relation of rose and wine is very unique.. Sign of Love n Romance..
Re. a precious dry rose
So much feeling and heart in this one.
You sure know how to write these feeling poems ...
BIG LIKE
I nominated this poem for Poem of the Month - August
Good Luck dimpy
You sure know how to write these feeling poems ...
BIG LIKE
I nominated this poem for Poem of the Month - August
Good Luck dimpy
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Re: Re. a precious dry rose
15th Aug 2023 3:41am
Hello artist.. I have no words how to thank you. 🥺 It is like a dry leaf got a chance to fly in the sky... Thank you for giving so much respect to my poetry 🙏 I'm really grateful to you.. ❤ This is the first time that someone has appreciated me like this way... 😘😘 many thanks.
Re: Re. a precious dry rose
15th Aug 2023 11:12am
Your welcome dimpy
You write from your heart and it shows ...
Poets need encouragement and I'm happy to nominate you as you consistently write your ❤
You write from your heart and it shows ...
Poets need encouragement and I'm happy to nominate you as you consistently write your ❤
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Re: Re. a precious dry rose
15th Aug 2023 11:17am
Re. a precious dry rose
15th Aug 2023 1:24am
Re: Re. a precious dry rose
15th Aug 2023 3:45am