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desire burns inside my ache
to be what you crave
it hunts my heart
I hear your no
go no further
I cringe, biting leather, gagging
I play with my hair pushing off the sting of rejection
it pulls me under the surface where I drown
deep inside of pools of sorrow
why do I keen?
when your heart belongs to the women made of stone
perfect to gaze upon
cutthroat
Published 28th Jul 2023
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28th Jul 2023 11:18am
28th Jul 2023 3:39pm
hello beautiful Debbie thank you graciously dearest poet it's good to be back 💕
28th Jul 2023 11:30am
28th Jul 2023 3:40pm
28th Jul 2023 11:59am
You'd be unhappy if happy
Pain is your salvation
DUP is well again, you're back ..
Pain is your salvation
DUP is well again, you're back ..
28th Jul 2023 3:41pm
hello dearest Poet thank you, I'm glad to be back I had to take a break for a bit you know my mania comes and goes 💕
28th Jul 2023 12:41pm
28th Jul 2023 3:42pm
28th Jul 2023 6:48pm
From the very first line you capture that incredible need and desire that cuts so deep leaving scars buried under countless feelings and emotions. That eternal craving that will always hunt the heart and stab the soul. Trying to push forward while being held back and unable to accept that fate. Biting leather and gagging for it, that need to have the cuts filled again. So wet, drowning in pools of sorrow where the intensity of needs only grows. The women made of stone are unable to express the depth of your body and soul. And so he will be back to cut your throat again and again... and he will always be thinking of you...
As always, I do love what you have written. Sorry I haven't been around.
I really hope you are doing well and wish you all the best. :)
As always, I do love what you have written. Sorry I haven't been around.
I really hope you are doing well and wish you all the best. :)
28th Jul 2023 7:13pm
hello beautiful Kristina thank you for your beautifully in-depth interpretation of this write...you understand deeply what others don't always seem to get... I'm okay beautiful I myself took a couple month break from here as I was in a bad head space and didn't want to spread it you know? well. have a beautiful day today 💕
20th Aug 2023 7:09am
That second stanza is deep (for all meanings of the word) as it conjures images and emotion.
Well done.
Well done.
20th Aug 2023 7:56pm
