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YOUR BODY NEXT TO MINE
I love your body next to mine;
it makes bed times feel so divine
when you consent to toy with me,
taking us both to ecstasy,
to end up, in each other's arms,
in afterglow while body calms.....
it makes bed times feel so divine
when you consent to toy with me,
taking us both to ecstasy,
to end up, in each other's arms,
in afterglow while body calms.....
Published 21st Jul 2023
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21st Jul 2023 12:09pm
21st Jul 2023 2:13pm
Short is what I purposely went for, it certainly raised bedroom images in my own mind.
22nd Jul 2023 4:23pm
24th Jul 2023 5:33am
It is admirable when a wise poet can articulate in few, but sentimental words to convey what is on his mind and in his heart.
Enjoy your upcoming week.
Enjoy your upcoming week.
18th Aug 2023 7:27am
You have written beautifully..well If we get warmth in someone's arms at night, it feels like divinity and completeness.
