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The Loitering Twilight
There was thunder in the air
It arrived with the July Sun
The kind of night
That drains the love from a man's heart
Leaving a wild hate unchecked
On nights like these
Insomniacs dream of sleep
Flowers ooze a heavy scent
And the twilight lasts for hours
Published 13th Jul 2023
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13th Jul 2023 2:31pm
13th Jul 2023 2:54pm
Thanks for reading it. and thanks for your words of strength
regards
james
regards
james
13th Jul 2023 4:42pm
This reads like classic poetry. High quality work.
I like the wild hate line. Very raw and real.
I like the wild hate line. Very raw and real.
14th Jul 2023 2:06pm
13th Jul 2023 6:37pm
14th Jul 2023 2:07pm
Thank you for reading it.
The thunder is a strange phenomenom. sometimes you feel it, rather than see it or hear it.
regards
james
The thunder is a strange phenomenom. sometimes you feel it, rather than see it or hear it.
regards
james
15th Jul 2023 8:56am
You're a favorite of mine here, James. Thank you for continuing to be here, sharing your talents.
I soak them up and await more...
🌹💙 - S
I soak them up and await more...
🌹💙 - S
15th Jul 2023 11:10am
Thank you for reading,
Thanks for your kind words. This site is great. It's one of the few places people who read poetry read my work. You can't ask more than that.
Regards
James
Thanks for your kind words. This site is great. It's one of the few places people who read poetry read my work. You can't ask more than that.
Regards
James
