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Missin' E
Drifting
in my own thoughts
I will stay afloat
in this swamp
of my own longing
for you,
your touch
your kiss
my soothing rhythm
that calms
and comforts
all my hurts and pains
diminishing all glum
by you.
(R)mai6-27-23
in my own thoughts
I will stay afloat
in this swamp
of my own longing
for you,
your touch
your kiss
my soothing rhythm
that calms
and comforts
all my hurts and pains
diminishing all glum
by you.
(R)mai6-27-23
Published 27th Jun 2023
Author's Note
Used to challenge myself in writing on a certain precepts. This though not that polished, i was able to write a piece without "E" in 14 lines :)
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You cleverly met that challenge writing such a lipogramic poem. We often take the vowel E so mucn for granted that "No E's" can frequently mean "No ease" for writing.
A romantic yearnsome write all the same. No E would mean no "love" or "desire" being mentioned.
A romantic yearnsome write all the same. No E would mean no "love" or "desire" being mentioned.
28th Jun 2023 2:56am
Have just reread this, bathing in the warmth of words. Favourite lines:
I will stay afloat
in this swamp
of my own longing
my soothing rhythm
that calms
and comforts
I will stay afloat
in this swamp
of my own longing
my soothing rhythm
that calms
and comforts
18th Jul 2023 8:31am
you just put a smile on my lips. . . i felt nice when someone reads you and leave a good word for it. it meant alot. thanks so much :)
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23rd Oct 2023 5:10am
"Drifting in my own thoughts" I really love that line. Very nicely put. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
23rd Oct 2023 10:11am
