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my latest wounds
my latest
wounds
bleed
from her laughter,
in this
moonless night
with pastel tears,
these
overheated
too hot summer
nights
i sweat dreams,
golden mournings
reject
the darkness
as i have
been rejected,
each night
i am almost
missed
but never
called for.
wounds
bleed
from her laughter,
in this
moonless night
with pastel tears,
these
overheated
too hot summer
nights
i sweat dreams,
golden mournings
reject
the darkness
as i have
been rejected,
each night
i am almost
missed
but never
called for.
Published 26th Jun 2023
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26th Jun 2023 6:01am
Dear J,
“i am almost
missed
but never
called for.” of my god this made my heart bleed. I understand this hurt.
This is a beautiful piece despite its subject matter because you’ve written it so eloquently. H🌷
“i am almost
missed
but never
called for.” of my god this made my heart bleed. I understand this hurt.
This is a beautiful piece despite its subject matter because you’ve written it so eloquently. H🌷
26th Jun 2023 8:56am
26th Jun 2023 6:14am
This pierces to the very deepest places of emotional poignance...
Poetry through and through.
Excellent work, James
🌹B
Poetry through and through.
Excellent work, James
🌹B
26th Jun 2023 8:56am
26th Jun 2023 9:39am
The heartache with this one is impossible not to feel. Haunting.
But I loved it. " Moonless night with pastel tears" great wording.
But I loved it. " Moonless night with pastel tears" great wording.
26th Jun 2023 9:50am
26th Jun 2023 3:22pm
Your words are lyrical and lovely. Its impossible to not feel this poem. One of your best yet.
26th Jun 2023 7:54pm
28th Jun 2023 7:23am
That you ache this way saddens me. It will be a celebration, the day you wake to warmth and acceptance :) just announce it with a jovial haiku, will you, please?
