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If You Wake Me (make sure its to whisper "i love you")
don't
ever
wake me
for this
dream
is you
standing
outside
your home
with a
pocket full
of hope
taking handfuls
throwing them
at your window
each one
a butterfly
on the ledge
so many things
that could be
if only
holding one
of those
butterflies
be touched
by the
hope
of my heart
feeling
as i do
about you
so never
wake me
as reality
only brings
rejection
just want
to hear
that whisper
in my dream
i love you
too
ever
wake me
for this
dream
is you
standing
outside
your home
with a
pocket full
of hope
taking handfuls
throwing them
at your window
each one
a butterfly
on the ledge
so many things
that could be
if only
holding one
of those
butterflies
be touched
by the
hope
of my heart
feeling
as i do
about you
so never
wake me
as reality
only brings
rejection
just want
to hear
that whisper
in my dream
i love you
too
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21st Jun 2023 6:36pm
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You're a gentle breeze wafting hopeful dreams and the warmth of romance ... Man, you're a bar setter.
Exquisite work, Colin
It's so wonderful to have your ink back on the regular.
Love it
🌹💙
Exquisite work, Colin
It's so wonderful to have your ink back on the regular.
Love it
🌹💙
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22nd Jun 2023 2:33am
well ive caught the bug for posting again
abd discoverubg older pieces in my man shed of poems
first ru g setter
abd discoverubg older pieces in my man shed of poems
first ru g setter
Re. If You Wake Me (nake sure its to whisper "i love you")
22nd Jun 2023 2:49am
Another happy sigh. This one feels like that cozy moment just before waking up.... beautiful.
❤️k
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22nd Jun 2023 3:20pm
damnit, Brother!
Damn great lament of
things to come
things not coming
things dreamily
and
just a simple things of lost
You are outta control !!!
Damn great lament of
things to come
things not coming
things dreamily
and
just a simple things of lost
You are outta control !!!
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22nd Jun 2023 4:46pm