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Bits and Pieces 1
The twin shackles of distance and time
Cannot prevent or confine
But as sunlit highlights of your hair
Strays the eye a moment’s stare
So do these too,
Distance and time
To memories' whisper pause my mind
In imaginings…
The breeze is but your breath on my skin
And the sun but dim
To the light of your eyes
And all the world both curve and line
But fades to you
The love that’s mine.
Cannot prevent or confine
But as sunlit highlights of your hair
Strays the eye a moment’s stare
So do these too,
Distance and time
To memories' whisper pause my mind
In imaginings…
The breeze is but your breath on my skin
And the sun but dim
To the light of your eyes
And all the world both curve and line
But fades to you
The love that’s mine.
Published 14th Jun 2023
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15th Jun 2023 3:37am
Dear AJ,
I’m completely jealous. Hands down. This whole rhyming thing is starting to annoy! When I write a rhyming poem it sounds like Mother Goose. You write a rhyming poem and it’s all mature and flows like you were spoon fed these words from freakin Shakespeare! 😏
The subject matter is gorgeously romantic and the length is perfect.
It’s a beautiful write. H🌷
I’m completely jealous. Hands down. This whole rhyming thing is starting to annoy! When I write a rhyming poem it sounds like Mother Goose. You write a rhyming poem and it’s all mature and flows like you were spoon fed these words from freakin Shakespeare! 😏
The subject matter is gorgeously romantic and the length is perfect.
It’s a beautiful write. H🌷
15th Jun 2023 5:57am
Dear H., 🌼
Perhaps one day you shall obtain to the level of maturity and sophistication in which I revel. Until then... 🙄😛😁😂😂😂
Sincerely,
J.
Perhaps one day you shall obtain to the level of maturity and sophistication in which I revel. Until then... 🙄😛😁😂😂😂
Sincerely,
J.
Anonymous
15th Jun 2023 10:18am
This hums....with a romantic cadence all it's own...and that feel, those words, that imagery you bestow ....becomes utterly enchanting. ✨
You continually take my breath away.
Thank you so much for that, it's an absolute treat.
Always looking forward to reading more,
🌹💙 - B
You continually take my breath away.
Thank you so much for that, it's an absolute treat.
Always looking forward to reading more,
🌹💙 - B
15th Jun 2023 7:49pm
🌼
If you and H. keep inflating my ego, I'll be walking around with a giant bobble head on my shoulders 😮😂😂😂
💙
Thank you. Please tell me more 😁😇
If you and H. keep inflating my ego, I'll be walking around with a giant bobble head on my shoulders 😮😂😂😂
💙
Thank you. Please tell me more 😁😇
