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Mood and Sacrifice
Taking you
Soft allure
Mood and aura
As you slipped out of your bra
Into my arms
A long afternoon making love
Out of desires long held
There’s nobody quite like us
Love notes and poetry
Explanations unnecessary
Truths and leather
Stretched beyond reason
Staring into the wonder we call
Home
Soft allure
Mood and aura
As you slipped out of your bra
Into my arms
A long afternoon making love
Out of desires long held
There’s nobody quite like us
Love notes and poetry
Explanations unnecessary
Truths and leather
Stretched beyond reason
Staring into the wonder we call
Home
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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18th May 2023 10:36pm
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18th May 2023 10:37pm
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
18th May 2023 11:26pm
Oh so beautiful. The poem and the painting. The artwork is so dreamy and you perfectly captured it’s essence in poem form.
Xx
Xx
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19th May 2023 00:00am
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18th May 2023 11:54pm
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19th May 2023 00:02am
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
19th May 2023 1:34am
We think that this piece should be titled "Unity." We see the pieces meaning between to individuals so in need. But within the pic we see a multitude of races and faces and the piece kinda takes on a a different meaning. There's a unity of the masses within the piece. Tight work
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19th May 2023 2:53am
High Praise my good man
Intimacy brings us to the center and from there we carve out and writhe in ecstasy with each otter …
Colors don’t matter in that space, just a Union of one ..
Dig your thinking ME
Intimacy brings us to the center and from there we carve out and writhe in ecstasy with each otter …
Colors don’t matter in that space, just a Union of one ..
Dig your thinking ME
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
19th May 2023 6:16am
Good painting to go with the poem. Like Eerie consider it a dreamy piece. Favourite phrase, to illustrate that quality
you slipped out of your bra
Into my arms [paints a visualisable picture of that unresisting moment]
you slipped out of your bra
Into my arms [paints a visualisable picture of that unresisting moment]
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Re: Re. Mood and Sacrifice
Thank you for your great comment Solomon, she's easy to write about. It's a magical flow often .... Appreciate the art commet as well.
Stay tuned for more ...
Thx
Stay tuned for more ...
Thx
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
19th May 2023 11:21pm
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19th May 2023 11:56pm
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
20th May 2023 9:12am
Dear PS,
When you show your softer side you really go for it. This is a lovely poem painting combo that lets the reader soar away on a flight of romantic fancy. Beautiful pieces of outstanding talent.
H🌷
When you show your softer side you really go for it. This is a lovely poem painting combo that lets the reader soar away on a flight of romantic fancy. Beautiful pieces of outstanding talent.
H🌷
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Dear H,
Yes, I've been told I have a soft side and I don't show it enough so this is one for the books. I appreciate your praise and comment. I'm always trying to get back to this kind of writing. It was like this more when I first reached for the pen. It will be 10 years here in the fall. Time does fly when you're having fun ...
Appreciate the RL
Thanks H
❤
Yes, I've been told I have a soft side and I don't show it enough so this is one for the books. I appreciate your praise and comment. I'm always trying to get back to this kind of writing. It was like this more when I first reached for the pen. It will be 10 years here in the fall. Time does fly when you're having fun ...
Appreciate the RL
Thanks H
❤
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
20th May 2023 1:52pm
When you reach for the light, you always hit the mark. This is a sweet, heart-moving beauty. I picture two people who consistently want what's best for each other, and that's what the world needs more of... lovely work.
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. Mood and Sacrifice
20th May 2023 2:36pm
Yes, you really got the vibe on this one.
Lots of knowing and care ...
BIG LIKE your comment k
Thx
🤠❤
Lots of knowing and care ...
BIG LIKE your comment k
Thx
🤠❤
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
20th May 2023 3:48pm
I agree with Eerie. The ethereal, beautiful essence of the paining matches your poem perfectly. Love when your softer side makes an appearance.
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Re: Re. Mood and Sacrifice
20th May 2023 5:28pm
I let that side out here and there. If I did it too much it would have less appeal as the bottom line is I'm a bad lieutenant rogue and comfortable in my different skins.
You're too kind Mary but I appreciate it !
X
You're too kind Mary but I appreciate it !
X
Re. Mood and Sacrifice
21st May 2023 5:23am
When you have that kind of home, you're really home. Another great pairing.
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21st May 2023 12:10pm
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Re. Mood and Sacrifice
25th Jun 2023 7:22am
Erotic, sensual and romantic, all nicely rolled up and delivered like fine art.
BL, RL.
BL, RL.
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Re: Re. Mood and Sacrifice
25th Jun 2023 12:55pm
This is a special erotic one
I'm glad it reached you this way ..
Thanks for the BL, RL
Appreciate you Wally
I'm glad it reached you this way ..
Thanks for the BL, RL
Appreciate you Wally