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Zack's World
The halo holds the twisting head
Who gives grins to the lighted screen
For flashes fast
For flashes bright
That captures his eyes instead
Of imprisoning what’s seen
From his past
From his sight
Reaching to find winds of whims
To take him to peace pursued
By lives last
By lives might
Too real to reckon within
Worlds which sure reason eludes. (14)
Alert are his hand controls
Which will chart the course they choose
Through the game
Through the strain
To live challenge to extol
The most precious who refuse
The branded name
The branded gain
So struggles such the eyes find
A hope had by none too rare
That life tames
What remains
For future returns to kind
And concerned kingdoms that dare. (28)
The realm teaches some a true dream
To restrain the doomed designs
That contain
That contort
How the balance became reamed
By breaks in straight streamed lines
Of refrains
Of retorts
So troubled some try to paint
Paths he plows to perceive
The remains
The resorts
Of any that are so sainted
They are nothing but achieved. (42)
Spirit lights his freckled face
That glows true to the joy had
Seeing life
Being free
By those so bound to their place
But Zack delights for the fad
With no grief
With much glee
That channels what’s not his own
But imagined escape there
From the rife
That he sees
To his wonder of what’s known
In his world of such great care. (56)
RVM (9-18-08)
Who gives grins to the lighted screen
For flashes fast
For flashes bright
That captures his eyes instead
Of imprisoning what’s seen
From his past
From his sight
Reaching to find winds of whims
To take him to peace pursued
By lives last
By lives might
Too real to reckon within
Worlds which sure reason eludes. (14)
Alert are his hand controls
Which will chart the course they choose
Through the game
Through the strain
To live challenge to extol
The most precious who refuse
The branded name
The branded gain
So struggles such the eyes find
A hope had by none too rare
That life tames
What remains
For future returns to kind
And concerned kingdoms that dare. (28)
The realm teaches some a true dream
To restrain the doomed designs
That contain
That contort
How the balance became reamed
By breaks in straight streamed lines
Of refrains
Of retorts
So troubled some try to paint
Paths he plows to perceive
The remains
The resorts
Of any that are so sainted
They are nothing but achieved. (42)
Spirit lights his freckled face
That glows true to the joy had
Seeing life
Being free
By those so bound to their place
But Zack delights for the fad
With no grief
With much glee
That channels what’s not his own
But imagined escape there
From the rife
That he sees
To his wonder of what’s known
In his world of such great care. (56)
RVM (9-18-08)
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