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Home Remedy(Senryu)
Stomach aching now
I need some tea to settle
Peppermint is cool~
I need some tea to settle
Peppermint is cool~
Published 11th May 2023
Author's Note
Stomach is aching right now. Why not right a Senryu on it? Here's a little something I whipped up as I think about making peppermint tea for my tummy ache, with some slight humor💜
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11th May 2023 00:56am
Dear KG,
While Im sorry your stomach is upset the image of the soothing tea is quite the sensory remedy. I can almost smell the peppermint. Cheers to feeling better. H🌷
While Im sorry your stomach is upset the image of the soothing tea is quite the sensory remedy. I can almost smell the peppermint. Cheers to feeling better. H🌷
11th May 2023 1:29am
Haha thanks, you made me smile big with this comment. I appreciate your feedback and am glad you enjoyed the read, cheers!😊💜
11th May 2023 3:02am
It IS cool, isn't it!!
I also swear by spearmint tea, as well.
Love senryś and this one, well, it really hit a nerve with me, in a kindred sort of way. I often drink peppermint tea and find it extremely soothing...
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I wholly applaud this ink!
Nicely penned
🌹-🍵
Thank you for sharing
I also swear by spearmint tea, as well.
Love senryś and this one, well, it really hit a nerve with me, in a kindred sort of way. I often drink peppermint tea and find it extremely soothing...
....
I wholly applaud this ink!
Nicely penned
🌹-🍵
Thank you for sharing
11th May 2023 3:15am
Aweeeee you're the sweetest, I'm really glad you liked it and connected with it so deeply! And thank YOU for reading!💜😊
