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The L Word
I L you
You can't stop me
Perhaps it's mutual
Time will never tell
There's quiet moments
Suffering too
Too much damn rain
Alone in my thoughts
You'll never see this
If you do
You'd probably make fun of me
Change the subject
Anything to avoid
That damn elephant in the room
A Master or tormented
My own game
BIG
You can't stop me
Perhaps it's mutual
Time will never tell
There's quiet moments
Suffering too
Too much damn rain
Alone in my thoughts
You'll never see this
If you do
You'd probably make fun of me
Change the subject
Anything to avoid
That damn elephant in the room
A Master or tormented
My own game
BIG
Author's Note
Inspired by Styxian
Deep in the heart zone and telling stories
Painting by Poetspeak
Deep in the heart zone and telling stories
Painting by Poetspeak
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The L Word
29th Apr 2023 7:07pm
Men only use the word Love when they are truly in love with someone. Keep on writing.
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29th Apr 2023 8:53pm
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29th Apr 2023 8:54pm
Re. The L Word
29th Apr 2023 7:44pm
Poem and pieces should be titled, "Scars" both makes us think of wounds. Tight work dude
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29th Apr 2023 8:55pm
Re. The L Word
29th Apr 2023 9:50pm
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29th Apr 2023 10:01pm
Re. The L Word
30th Apr 2023 00:37am
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30th Apr 2023 00:41am
Thx for the L on the art. It actually came out as I planned which is rare. I was just reading one of your poems like a minute ago. Karma
Thx PD
Thx PD
Re. The L Word
30th Apr 2023 5:00am
Some men can’t do certain things. Like say the L word or kiss. We all have something.
You, Sir have a true gift. Don’t ever stop speaking, even if you can’t get the whole word out.
And the painting is damn good too.
You, Sir have a true gift. Don’t ever stop speaking, even if you can’t get the whole word out.
And the painting is damn good too.
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I will continue to speak
Always
There were multiple reasons I wrote this poem
Mostly for those who have issues with intimacy.
That will never be me but like you say, men often can't get there ....
Time and space Mary
Thx ❤
Always
There were multiple reasons I wrote this poem
Mostly for those who have issues with intimacy.
That will never be me but like you say, men often can't get there ....
Time and space Mary
Thx ❤
Re. The L Word
30th Apr 2023 1:34pm
Aw man, your soft side is really lovely.
The way you wind out unrequited love, and brave the possibility of open rejection is relatable and wrenching. You were so vulnerable here that it’s hard to look away without sighing.
This was beautiful.
The fuck.
The way you wind out unrequited love, and brave the possibility of open rejection is relatable and wrenching. You were so vulnerable here that it’s hard to look away without sighing.
This was beautiful.
The fuck.
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30th Apr 2023 1:53pm
It's never easy to write these.
I'll bet it is relatable to most poets here.
To write poems about unrequited love tears me apart but what else do you do with those feelings?
Yeah a BIG softy at heart, what can I say ?
BIG thanks Betty
Appreciate your comment 🙏
I'll bet it is relatable to most poets here.
To write poems about unrequited love tears me apart but what else do you do with those feelings?
Yeah a BIG softy at heart, what can I say ?
BIG thanks Betty
Appreciate your comment 🙏
Re. The L Word
1st May 2023 12:38pm
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1st May 2023 12:41pm
I think I covered all the bases.
I wonder how I had the audacity to post this ?
Nonetheless I thank you James
I wonder how I had the audacity to post this ?
Nonetheless I thank you James
Re. The L Word
3rd May 2023 1:45am
Okay, I won't decipher your painting... I won't tell you that I see a lady's hand, as she drags it away from the glass of beer. And the reflection of the man (bottom left) judging her...
Nope, I'm not mentioning it!
It's a very interesting painting. Obviously.
As for your writing, awesome! I like it when you venture into these areas of "soft"? It shows your heart. Never shy away from being humane toward yourself.
I also see the patchwork from readings, that you've sewn together, to make this whole. Little ideas wrapped together into a solid structure.
No one will see this write as anything less than a BIG. No fear!
I appreciate you, Poetspeak. You're a pillar here. And thank you for the motivation to keep going.
Nope, I'm not mentioning it!
It's a very interesting painting. Obviously.
As for your writing, awesome! I like it when you venture into these areas of "soft"? It shows your heart. Never shy away from being humane toward yourself.
I also see the patchwork from readings, that you've sewn together, to make this whole. Little ideas wrapped together into a solid structure.
No one will see this write as anything less than a BIG. No fear!
I appreciate you, Poetspeak. You're a pillar here. And thank you for the motivation to keep going.
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3rd May 2023 3:54am
One of my best comments received ever Styx. I thank you. You inspire me often to try and go to the heart and less shock treatments. I'm trying harder to get back to this kind of writing. Reading you always helps. L is not to be denied. I grew up with the capacity to give it. Unfortunately some bad relationships almost robbed me of that ability to give so I went rogue for several years. Happily I was able to shake off the evil inside and reclaim myself. The the writing began 10 years ago and I'm still looking to Master it.
One day we will meet at the Metephor Bar and Grill for whiskey and good times ....
Appreciate the RL.
Means the world to me.
Thx Styx
One day we will meet at the Metephor Bar and Grill for whiskey and good times ....
Appreciate the RL.
Means the world to me.
Thx Styx
Re. The L Word
3rd May 2023 7:38pm
Love.. what a concept. It can heal or kill the human spirit.
BL.
buddhakitty.
BL.
buddhakitty.
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3rd May 2023 8:50pm
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24th Jun 2023 00:31am
Weighs heavy in the mind (and heart) but you express it so nicely. But we see it and we like it a lot.
Awesome stuff sir
Awesome stuff sir
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24th Jun 2023 1:45am